Extremely well-written, but then that's to be expected by now. In some things induction is quite acceptable.

jesus, you make me ache.

gorgeous.

Death? Or a beautifully sad Italian piece of music? Either way....

ha!haha...this gets a 10 though..i'm sorry, but you are to fucking much. really. here. i'm gonna go wash my hands now and prepare for my pig shank stew.

Careful, lest ye carry the weight of all mothers:)

Hmmm... maybe one need be a woman to fully appreciate the last couple of stanzas. The last three lines reeks too much of wiccanism for me.

keep the last two lines...lose the rest. obviously that was your point anyway..unless i'm as stoned as my pal settle seems to think i am...i'll give you a 1 for the lacerating corn, but unfortunately i have a serious allergic reaction to angel gibberish.`

Well, one guess: this ain't about England's Queen Anne.

Well I did not ache as the writer of triangle poems (she is just that kind of girl), but with a snip here and a snip there you could work this into a fine piece.

I like it.

Brava. The opening line alone...

Okay, this is rather better.

do you really think that a timeless supernatural creature created by god to serve god before man was even thought up is going to be making smiles at you when you die? i have thee odd feeling that these highly overated creatures have better things to do..like get our lord the fallen accusor saint lucifer back in the drivers seat where he/she belongs...and how come the devil gets to be elizabeth hurley and harvy kietel in the movies, but god has to be goerge burns and alanis morrisette...see..these are the serious questions you should be asking yourself. daily, if possible.n

'The banshee of the wind...' Beautiful. Get rid of the last two lines, though. They ruin the whole thing.

yes, yes. true, but does not cut me to the quick, as the other does.

I've never seen anything this big from you before! I'm shocked! I'm agasp! I'm crying. This doesn't feel like a first daft though.ditto

Hee hee. What fun.

Please tell me 'tow teachers' isn't a typo. It's much funnier as it is.

'And they still make me pay taxes...' -- brilliant.