Christof
on some deleted poem
8 Nov 2002, 1:15 AM
And all this before coffee? I am envious. I like the 'rake', very physical.
An unfortunate error of judgement, but a decent haiku. 7.
poetandbabbit, my hero is Bud the Chud from the movie CHUD 2.
Your lover reminds me of me. Your poem, of the incessant need. Very well written. I get a realistic picture, I like that.
The last one is the best - to combine fisting with petty theft is truly a gift.
You goddam voodoo types and your lack of foresight. Always check with your local augury reader first.
Stick that up your bollocks! (as Roy Keane said to Mick McCarthy)
Wow. That's original.
Hahah!Well cheers 4 listening!It's nice when requests are fulfilled!And this is all true
Aw, man, ur gangsta stylins aint flowin like dey used 2, ur losin da madskillz and da wespect.But tell da Scotty Dog dat his stinkin ass needs a bath
Nice one, the crow isn't Scott dressed in feathers by any chance is it?And what the hell is that about a spud in the 5th stanza?
Don't show no more disrespect to ma homie, ho! Is poetwy is wickywicky compawed to anyfing u can do, and me and da rosiebailey will mush ya if ya say othawise!Wickywickywackywackywa,G!
Naw, this just sucks. it's the ugly fat kid at the back of the class whining about how they're a good person. Sure, hon. I bet you give great... personality, too. in the dark.
we are now the knights who say "ee-ecky-ecky-p'kang.."
This is really very good. I've just read your personal profile and you write poetry as you speak, but the sound of it. So you're a natural. And only 17! At this age I had only just got beyond rhyming 'cat' and 'mat'.
I bet you're disappointed that since your dual identity became known Babbitt's poems have fallen out of favour. The public is a fickle creature. This is still tops, though. It is good to come back tothe old ones sometimes.
I should have given this a ten. So I will.