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cleverdevice on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 6 Nov 2002, 4:15 AM
And people blame me for being immature! Its sick.
deadstar on some deleted poem 6 Nov 2002, 4:47 AM
o yeh, dah westside posse is kicking it in Harlem, keep up da gd work, man
INTRANSIT on everyone sucks. by kliq 6 Nov 2002, 5:47 AM
I like the message. I think it could use some dressing up though.
INTRANSIT on some deleted poem 6 Nov 2002, 5:22 AM
He will wait into eternity for you. "Vesuvian in my impetuousness" killer.
kliq on when i had a fit by rosiebailey 6 Nov 2002, 4:30 AM
You are the future Mrs Rosie, are you in any way related to Mr Blooby.
deadstar on some deleted poem 6 Nov 2002, 4:36 AM
A subtle commentary on the ridiculous influx of French players in the English premiership.Beautiful and sublime.
deadstar on when i had a fit by rosiebailey 6 Nov 2002, 4:42 AM
He sed Blooby u fool! Ahhh, G, dis poem is da bomb, wespect.Fweddy supports ur shit, bwuddda.YEH!
cleverdevice on Innocence lost by deadstar 6 Nov 2002, 4:44 AM
Very symbolic of current events should Bush have his way. Sad news just in, Congress is Republican! Bush is unstoppable. Clinton had an IQ of 186, Bush's is 92! Where did it all go wrong? (apart from a certain secretary)
Tintagiles on rules by roses are read 5 Nov 2002, 7:43 PM
Are those actually line breaks or is it a prose poem? I can't quite tell.
Poetry is about rendering experience into art. Get it? The mere recounting of events does not poetry make. Look it up. Here is the inspiration, but not the transformation.
limonade on Beauty vs the beast by UAFANTHORPEY 5 Nov 2002, 9:12 PM
This image is cliche and you bring nothing new to it. You sound outraged and hurt rather than empowered.
god'swife on some deleted poem 5 Nov 2002, 9:24 PM
Fucking gorgeous. 'one round stone for one soft kiss' how incredibly telling and lovely and everything life/poetry should be. A gratifying exchange. Simple.
god'swife on some deleted poem 5 Nov 2002, 9:26 PM
Oh, but please change the title.
oohv on ... by logun2002ya 5 Nov 2002, 11:07 PM
I like this, it flows nicely. I don't comment much, but I liked this.
Just for you, here's my very bad Bush limerick: There was a young man named George Bush Who had no brains but a headful of mush He wanted a war No-one knew quite what for To avenge an old man named George Bush?
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Collectively Chilly by oohv 6 Nov 2002, 3:23 AM
What a load of complete and utter bollocks. This poeme looks like it was generated using a Random Sensitive Poeme generator written in Qbasic. It must be a joke. Surely!? O' sweet, beloved Jesu! Pray, let this be a joke! I beg of you! I... *weeps*
rosiebailey on some deleted poem 6 Nov 2002, 4:20 AM
You shouldnt smoke that is very naughty and if i was yo mumma i would knock yer out
cleverdevice on some deleted poem 6 Nov 2002, 4:45 AM
Exclellent, very witty.
cleverdevice on The Gunfighter by deadstar 6 Nov 2002, 4:46 AM
I like this a lot, its very original.
cleverdevice on some deleted poem 6 Nov 2002, 4:36 AM
This is tragic. I feel for you, 'homeboy'