cleverdevice
on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
6 Nov 2002, 4:15 AM
And people blame me for being immature! Its sick.
o yeh, dah westside posse is kicking it in Harlem, keep up da gd work, man
I like the message. I think it could use some dressing up though.
He will wait into eternity for you.
"Vesuvian in my impetuousness" killer.
You are the future Mrs Rosie, are you in any way related to Mr Blooby.
A subtle commentary on the ridiculous influx of French players in the English premiership.Beautiful and sublime.
He sed Blooby u fool!
Ahhh, G, dis poem is da bomb, wespect.Fweddy supports ur shit, bwuddda.YEH!
Very symbolic of current events should Bush have his way. Sad news just in, Congress is Republican! Bush is unstoppable. Clinton had an IQ of 186, Bush's is 92! Where did it all go wrong? (apart from a certain secretary)
Are those actually line breaks or is it a prose poem? I can't quite tell.
Poetry is about rendering experience into art. Get it? The mere recounting of events does not poetry make. Look it up. Here is the inspiration, but not the transformation.
This image is cliche and you bring nothing new to it. You sound outraged and hurt rather than empowered.
Fucking gorgeous.
'one round stone for one soft kiss' how incredibly telling and lovely and everything life/poetry should be. A gratifying exchange. Simple.
Oh, but please change the title.
I like this, it flows nicely. I don't comment much, but I liked this.
Nicholas Jones
on George Bush, Jesus Christ, and the good ole US of A! by dougsoderstrom
6 Nov 2002, 1:37 AM
Just for you, here's my very bad Bush limerick:
There was a young man named George Bush
Who had no brains but a headful of mush
He wanted a war
No-one knew quite what for
To avenge an old man named George Bush?
What a load of complete and utter bollocks. This poeme looks like it was generated using a Random Sensitive Poeme generator written in Qbasic. It must be a joke. Surely!? O' sweet, beloved Jesu! Pray, let this be a joke! I beg of you! I... *weeps*
You shouldnt smoke that is very naughty and if i was yo mumma i would knock yer out
Exclellent, very witty.
I like this a lot, its very original.
This is tragic. I feel for you, 'homeboy'