INTRANSIT
on ending by Limness
16 Oct 2002, 3:50 PM
Screw the damn fortune, gimme the cookie! 9 for your gentle opening of the baked flower.
Hee hee.
There are these two girls and I love them more than anything
They have everything I want
And nothing but them is anymore important to me
But there of course are some problems
Ones that are not easy to fix
I try my best to solve them
But of course I can't get rid of the pricks let alone this one bitch
Who, used to be my friend
Until she got pissed
Made one mistake
And she put me on "THE LIST"
So now Angie isn't my friend
All because I went wrong
Terryn made my life miserable
Wished at first I didnt belong
But then I look at the good side
Happy the other girl I love is still my friend
And try to make sure
This friendship won't end.
(I took the liberty of correcting your spelling)
Giveme one single, good, understandable and worthwhile argument for the addition of those ridiculous tildes and asterixes in the title. Just one.
The tambourine just doesn't scan well because I associate tambourines with women, other than that, I like it.
'Climb every mountain...' This is a sappy, sappy musical lyric. It has been said before. I'll take 'Sound of Music's version, myself. Even if I don'T really like that musical.
Ample imagery, my favorite. The wings and the petals make me smile. Should it be "will coil.."?
I love this title. I run and have fallen on 3 occasions. Worse than a car wreck. King-Kong or Indiana Jones?
Go to your room young lady! 8
"dewy dunegrass", does it for me.
(incredibly) in your face imagery and honesty also. i wish i knew, answers the question.n
Yup, works best when you do it that way.
SWEET...Very Impressed 10 for you...lmao 10 for using atleast 1% of ur brain
Epic! Spectacular! Technicolor madness. Don't let Schpeilberg get his hands on it. He'll turn it into heart-warmer, the dirty little heeb!
Absofuckinlutely. The Santa Monica / Puente Hills corridor. From the Pacific to the Cleveland National Forest. It runs through my hometown, About a 5 min. drive to the base of it. 3.5 miles up, 3.5 miles down. Lots of mountain bikers. Chaparal, deer, hawks, & vultures. In the Fall & Spring you can hear the coyote pups howling at sunset, when mama & papa return with the KFC. The first time I went upin the hills I was 9 and running away from home. I saw a rattle snake, ran down the hill and returned home to find noone had missed me. what a disappointment.
K??dresh be right... it is 'aphrodIsiac'. If you're going to edit these to remove all previous votes, limonade sweetheart, why not take the opportunity to fix those tiny, rare, ever-so-occasional typos? Just wondering. I still adore the first line. Oh, and the rest is excellent too.
I assume that's 'Seldom' (third from last line).
its delicious. great imagery
-=Dark_Angel=- shall be proud...