'far or soon'? that doesn't seem right

Stick to plagiary.

what DID you do? and, did you enjoy as much this time as the last?

Great first line, +3. Stra Trek reference, presumably, -7.

good poem. very interesting.

This is void of meaning. Line 6, your slip is showing.

i think i liked it better before. it felt more raw, in a salted wound kind of way...dunno.

You stun and amaze. A tonic for the ills of reading ugly navel lint poems. Praise Isis.

I'm completely captivated...barely breathing because I am so fucked up at the moment. Again, my heart aches.. and don't even know what to say. Ill get to you later...I really want to go through this...give me an hour. And wait for me outside while the rains fall upon a baptismal fall. 10

This is definitely a favorite of mine and once this trip is over...once the scary thoughts escape...and I am able to really get down and dirty...I would be honored to have some thoughts, your's, night-tongued, and deeply sexy in your words. mouth.

ok. Horray? i guess. 2

that is quite a ride in its own right....do i know you ? something about your voice sounds familiar...ah.well probably just an echo flinch on the sun dial..do you dial...?????<impressive piece> be proud. sorry for being short this evening...i'm on antibiotics..and reeling from a lowballing attack of the parasitic kind, but the old orange peel saved the day...thank god for fruit...and more than one rib.y

Maybe you should change brands or get off the bran-meal diet. Its funny the way simplicities become relevent. 6

this is weird, and d.a. i have no fucking clue who this person is so don't even bring me into this...still though, i can't help but wonder what kind of sick fucking conspiracy lies in ambush within this royaflesh sort here..i can smell something odd and metallic and shiny creeping through the curtains...be careful.rf.sometimes things work themselves out, but also more often deeper in....i am shallow...and/ i/ am /gone.

I have always been pulled towards your writing. Its magnetized tonight, rightfully so. You sir, are surely in my eyes...beckon and spoken sometime inbetween and throughout-without. 8

devilishly written, my friend. Vampires and wolves come out to meet the naughty and taut wrath of your sins.. Pray tonight.

dude, just give up

yes man, just yes

OoooOOOh! Weeeee! " Oh look ma, A rollercoaster ride! ( -Excuse me for a minute while I go hurl now please! ) " I can really feel this one and it really has a lot of ups and downs not to mention a few loop 'de' loops to really throw your mind and heart into a spin!

for a few moments/Whistle fucking dixie. fiend/finger licking good/-=--unless i'm commenting on something written towards me...than..even better. i'll fucking chest puff the spear of artemis, and lick smile the shaft smooth...for a price..gardenias.