such a sweet angel. They do that sorta thin? Watchin' o'r ya. Cute rhyme scheme. The Beaker will love this one. But me, i prefer a differn sorta poetry.

Anyone who doesn't act like a mature, serious adult gets put in the '-=Dark_Angel=- alter-ego' category. Don't fret it.

I shall duel sir. Thrust

that's not true. i love drugs remember...oh, and a nice flacid penis whispering sweet nothings into my ear....my b-day was the seventh of august, so i suppose if you want you can just toss off on a midget or a hyacynth maccaw and mail it to settle (he lives in my recycable bin)....he screens all of my incoming mail..thanks.."the boy who hates everyone, even his own splendid face" horus8' 'gripper of the grail'!'

The redundancy sure does not sneak up on you. I am sure there are much better ways to approach such a broad subject as grief.

How can you be all these things? What is it to be stardust and dreams? What is it to be hugs and kisses? This makes no sense. And why does the title have ** around it? To the trashcan with this.

It isn't a rant against parents. It's a rant (if you insist calling it that) against anyone who tries to change who you are for the sake of what is religiously or socially acceptable. :)

Also, I'm not beakism. If the best evidence you can come up with is "you both abbreviate 'poetandknowit' as 'PAKI'", don't you think it's time to give it up?

Okay, I give up, beaker, settle doylum. And I would take it to the chat room, but it doesn't work on my end.

New improve {--=Doylum=--} with wings. How dare you use my name in a sentance with those others Birthmark, i havent even said anything yet.

I'm not sure i like you attitude steaming pile of Frass. I don't think you trying hard enough. I don't care for you wittering or that of DA of H8 for that matter, you bring the tone down. Oh the lovely boatsails how they dance-ed before mine eyes. Throw the seagull some seltzer oh what a colourful display.

My remarks are nothing but witty and uplifting. They bring a smile to e'en the saddest child's face. Will you duel, or are you a coward?

but i'm quite clearly no DA, whoreass would love me if i were. And besides my wing are far more splendid than the -=Dark_Angel=-. Beakism you can't count ha ha

I have thought that you were a brave man in word and in deed, Settle. But you have sagged most displeasingly. Maybe I was just fooling myself...but is it so wrong for a girl to dream? Is it so wrong to hope that once, just once in my life, I could meet someone who would take me away to a far-off land and treat me to a poetry recital the likes of which I had never heard? And I thought you could be that man, Settle. But you are not a man. No. You are the Weasel of poemeranker. Indeed, you are greas'd.

horus8 loves nobody. He doesn't even love himself. I think we should cheer him up by throwing him a big birthday bash!!!!! Who's with me? Great! I'll toss off on the cake while you go injure someone in the confusion! P.S. Thrust. I roll 3d20 and score a critical hit!!!!!!!!!!1111 7423 experience points a winner is me

I love the line "I'm the Glimpse you caught out of the corner of your eye." I liked the structure of your poem as well, but there were far too many typos and other mechanical errors.

Alright, alright. Just forget everything I ever said about Michelfuckingangelo. It was just a god damn analogy.

ooh girl this is so ghetto. Keep doin' your thang. Much props! = )

As with most of my not-so-happy writing, the motivation is my relationship with my parents.

Indeed. If the poem flowed better, and if it wasn't a rant against parents, I'd enjoy it.