this poem damages my thaughts.

Sorry, she deleted all of her shit before I could post what I wanted to say. I could not waste it so I posted it here. It was to the Shewolf writer of the save the kitty poems.

Awful. 1. A large sack of wank. Poncy and overly expressive. I have a nasty taste in my mouth.

this is tender, and sweet. lucky you.

p&k--who were you referring to? i most certainly did not give you a 0.

t de la b, you were really going for a zero here, weren't you? you're not getting one from me, D.

is this another mask? you know who you are. y or n?

Depressing. 7. Keep taking those tablets; whatever, you do, don't forget. This is miserable stuff. If you were trying to be bleak and dark, congratulations. Not the thing to read if one needs cheering up.

i'd gladly pay, but just ask doylum--i'm a ne'er-do-well--so i guess it wouldn't hurt anyone to say this: IT WAS A LIE. ALL ADULTS LIE. ONLY KIDS TELL THE TRUTH. SO NEVER, EVER, EVER GROW UP. (growing up means you might have to think critically once in a while.) growing up 'is something i would disgrace'. and stuff. p.s.--have you read jade's stuff? and you still take her advice???

Shut up or I'll e-mail the creator of this site personally.You're not judging my poem. You're mocking it!

As much as I'm loathe to say it, this isn't bad. 6. It's evident that you're trying to be a smart-arse, but you pull it off. Nobody likes a smart-arse though, so just remember that when you're next out and about and telling everyone how good you are. Smart-Arse.

Alter egos abound!! Is there a purpose behind this shit?

Anyone who says another mean thing about me or my poetry is going to pay. Cause even if I don't care what you say, it still hurts and it wasn't my idea to put my poetry on here but my friend Jade's. So i'm only doing it for her sake. So shut your fat mouths and just vote!

you know the more of these shit poems this bog fellow praises the stronger and stronger i get...keep going you lover and praiser of weak scripture..i'm having the time of my life reading your constant one brain cell powered banter, are you a jewish cantor? were you in the car with princess di when they headlined the pillar? cuz wow your fucking chiding pursed english sensibility is right up the alley of a merchant ivory film...the english patient part deux...another tiresome three hours with a burn victim in the desert..is just what this site needed..not that your even from england..cuz i'd bet money you're just the semen soaked left hand of some midwestern poemranking ten year old with a knack for creating false identities, and if by chance you are from the land of drizzle...then..even better, cuz with you breathing and stinking up the place...no wonder you people always say "god save the queen" save her from having to listen, and or read any of your short, bland, see through, mind de-expanding rhetoric lacking rhetoric...ode to the sea blah blee ree tee blah blah i'm deep blah blah..i'm from england land of literary geniuses..blah..blah the sea blee vlee....you americans..blah blah should learn from me blah blah...we beat your pathetic asses then...stole your colony..and evolved at a hundred times the rate of your so called country(cuz i don't even think this clown is even english) has in 1500 years..do the math..we are two hundred some odd years old, and ye are over a thousand yet..we americans have saved your asses economicaly, militarily, and stylistically more times than i care to count...stay there.. enjoy your short termed reading materials..you deserve it..and your welfare too. you fucking two versed parrot...ha! 3/10

why, p&k! you surprise me! i will read this one again. i liked it very much after a first glance. nice job. your other stuff seems shallow, paired with this pithy (and maybe a little self-pitying, which is understandable) piece.

And just to show exactly how mature you are, you go through each of your critics' poems and put a 0 there, which is funny, because we are after the comments and not the votes. Does that make sense? We like the banter. So putting a 0 there when you didn't even read the fucking poem just shows your ignorance and immaturity. Did you tell your mother on us? Go back into all of our poems and leave a comment regarding the poem. Say something to us. We love the banter. Or at least I do, I cannot speak for the others. And THEN YOU PULL OFF YOUR POEMS!!! IS THAT HOW WE PAY? By Getting Rid Of You!!!!

Thorns is not shallow. Maybe misguided, but not shallow! I have explained away the other stuff to death, so I do not want to waste space. The are tidbits of a longer work that quite frankly is rubbish.

Damn! I like it. Hunny? Is that you? 7/10

But I am good. And I'm cute on top it.

ha ha! the blade turns to me! parry away, sir. you have met your match! (well done)