Venus
on some deleted poem
19 Aug 2002, 7:51 AM
Try flying instead next time.
and stuff.
zzinnia you must be realy clever because you are able to spot mistakes people are making and stuff like that where did you get it all from? your brilliant.
it's so fucking crucial
oh my, this just won't do.
this is why
I read his book, "What Did I Do?" last summer. Quite a fascinating sort. Another of the famous beats, although older, turned me onto him over breakfast at Nichol's one morning. I wont mention names out of respect for the dead. But HE lived in Kansas on a farm with about a billion cats. Anyway, I used to have breakfast with him from time to time. He was a man who liked his eggs over easy and his coffee full of cram and sugar and a dab of salt. I also one lived next door to the apartment where Nick Cassidy and Allen Ginsberg shacked up with Cassidy's wife for a summer. You could almost here the ghosts of the typewriter pounding away at night. So yes, all we spics have something to tell. I did not know of Larry Rivers passing. I quit reading obits in the NY Times when I turned 30. Have a good day, dear sir.
i'm only 9. i'm the reincarnation of seamus heany. the pope's going to cannonize me, even though i'm not catholic, for my contriburions to the arts. did i mention that i'm a prof emeritus at the sorbonne? that's why. oh, and one other thing, if you don't want criticism, don't submit your work to this site. i gave you clus; you give me sarcasm. right back at you, babe.
to take the time!
this has gotta be da or z or settle, playing around right...come on people..this is borderlne disturbing. da please tell me you're gonna jump out of the cake...right? if not i'll never stick up for a blonde being stereo typed again, or stick one period for that matter
you make no sense please exsplain more clearly.
the need to scroll really hurts the readability of your poems. thoughts disjoint, instead of flowing.
sounds good B.maybe you should put that in as one of your poems.
excellent.
well, it's nice to see you finally making an effort!
this poem is brilliant.
but it brings tears to my eyes at the thaught of it.good work i am gonna give it 10/10
well, it's nice to see you finally making an effort!
to read everynight with your child..
To be honest, the title is a bit of a red herring. The poem's really meant to be about the Spanish civil war (or at least the International Brigade), but could refer to any revolutionary group.
Thanks. Done