Looking at poetry only as "true poetry that rhymes" seems to narrow the scope.

Mainly in Glasgow Frass but I'm told they are devine. Thanks for the support.

what do u mean?

Fat bottomed girls you make the rocking world go round!

Glad you liked it P&K.

then again, maybe i'm a stalker.

but not together.

Perhaps didn't word that very well.I was responding to a criticism of my rhyming ability from one who seems to only write open verse. I enjoy all forms but prefer Rhyming poetry.

PAKI, isn't it about time you stuck a fucking sock in it? Thanks, Anagram, for a well worded tribute. I still work through Tie Yo Mutha Down to loosen up on the git. A, do they really batter and deep dry candy bars in Scotland?

More SHITE (or should that be PUSS).10 must have came from an alter ego. Now that is constructive critcism.

Know you were talking to Frass P&K but just for the record I can take criticism and appreciate your taking the time to read the poem and offer your valued opinion which was along the lines of what I expected.

Hey , well I guess you were at this poem first, but I cannot control the random file. Plus, I cannot figure who is who anymore (maybe it is this air in Colorado - what say you Venus, how do you breathe here). I miss Misery. Hours8, D.A., you, Doylum -- isn't it all the same.

Seven tens..Well sir, if that's the case I demand a recount. Hows that umbilical cord taste. Great. Glad to see your coming up fast. Enjoy the #1 seat.

Alright, 11am in VA, I'm up and doing what??? Refinishing my '59 Melody Maker, like I should? No, I'm logging back in to this damnable site. Thanks, Bachus, for a comment unusual for you, cogent, referential, intelligible; as a musician, do you know Every Body Gets Drunk At Elections? PAKI, I finally read some of your poetry; I like it much better than many of your wretchedly shallow comments. Frankly, I'd love to read more from Anagram; dude, I'm scots-american, I WILL visit the old country, it's gonna happen.

what the fuck r u on about? i dont understand? and yes i am dumb before you say i am.

i am only young i am still in school for gods sake so dont give me a lecture on punctuation cos ive had enough of it from my bastard teachers.and as for angels i would be glad to let you have the pleasure to skin me alive cos i dont realy care anymore ok?

-- 16-Aug-02, 09:02 PM Perhaps didn't word that very well.I was responding to a criticism of my rhyming ability from one who seems to only write open verse. I enjoy all forms but prefer rhyming poetry.

Do you have an affront against criticism? I am not making a personal attack like many on this site Frass. You are all beautiful people. If you do not want anything said about a poem, don't post it. So, I am sorry I cannot sugar coat everything or follow the writer of triangle and cello poems all over the site ogling. I just try to call it like I see it.Freddie Mercury was great and writing a poem expressing that, no matter how sentimental, is a "nice" gesture. But just because you do a sweet tribute does not make it a good poem.

I enjoyed the "War" poem and voted accordingly but chose to keep 'Queens council' on this one, but as we are apparently being brutally honest - this one is SHITE and struggled to be considered a zero.

ogle ogle ogle ogle. oops. sorry. got stuck there for a minute. hey p&k, for one who claims they can't follow me, you and i sure do find each other often enough. maybe doylum was right, and i am having a tryst. maybe it's with you...