razorgrin
on some deleted poem
12 Aug 2002, 12:42 PM
's true! and it was damn funny. Everyone should try the uvula thing.
's true! and it was damn funny. Everyone should try the uvula thing.
god bless the sneezers! they need it. sorry about your thumb. i spent yesterday floating in a lake, talking about riptides with divers. nary a wave to be seen, but plenty o'sun, and time to think.
it's no fun being in the service industry, period. perhaps an other unholy bargain could be struck? --liked it lots.
Such a creative use of profanity and in so little space. Pure genius, send this off to Harpers at once!
"Mage" scans better, muffin-butt. As for the sword, you know it's a wacky unique item forged in my old basement by the spider people as part of that unholy bargain.
semicolons rock my socks.
samurai make me totally hot.
who are you wrighting your love poems TO? who is it?
that might be the most upsetting outcome of my travels on this site thus far, therefore ye wins the HORUS8 AFTERNOON PRIZE FOR THE MOST SOBERING POEM HE'S READ YET, YET! i must now go and pour the wine to calm my nerves, my thought are with you.let us pray for skunk#2 humboldt county indica true. blessings all around! 8/10.m
this is the javelin that will kill d.a, the i ching of badda bing, let me guess..you gave yourself the seven to set the mode..right? who cares.. the poem is so balanced that it never moves..you could say all of this with a phrase or a word "taoistic-stagnation". it just never moves for the love of a mutilated jehova witness.. help me help you. tow it to a garage for repairs..i will pick up the tab. for i am as rich as a pauper, as thick as an unlit wick see how fun..this could go on forever, but it wont....
I am really sorry, I didn't know this was Poetry for Profit, if I had known I would have been less blatant with my clear plagurisim, as you would like to believe. However I would draw the line at daylight slurs on my person and would ask you, in the most aggresive terms, to keep all comments on the poem and not my sexual orientation, you dumb fuckwad.
I fear there is a touch of the tortured soul here, and it festoons with it magnitude to a cresendo of typicallity that can be only just forseen, or should that be overlooked, within the first few lines of the opening stanza. A Nice try but nice trys always come last...It's your future, son...I see drawing boards.
ok. your right...your title is a better poem then your poem..as for personal slurs..i'm typing left handed today and i'm on lithium...i have a dislocated thumb, and a rash on my pecker(from wetsuit) i smoke marlboros cuz it helps me hide my evil pock marked face..plus it helps me get laid and feel better about my tiny pud..i'm sorry..so sorry about the insinuation...here allow me to correct myself..i meant to say wow..what an impressive work of staggering genius..yes! this is exactly how i feel, and what i believe all smokers must feel and think..you are a prophet and a righteous manhandler..oops..man..woman.fuckit.skil
oh no.. not the drawing board. i will not lie to my teacher..i will not lie to my teacher..i will not. if you sense it ..it must be right. yes i'm a shallow homophobic (male hustler) and a mindless over sedater (junky) plus i have been known to make horrible decisions and not take responsibility for my actions, or all of this could be all invented fiction and child like fibbing to instigate thought provoking inuendos..naw..it's just ming gas. excuse me. p.s <to hear horus8 play a wide variety of instruments and compose music go to gangbox.com and visit mp3's there are hookers and larry flynt auctioning them off at the beginning for those of you with quicktime. it really plays better than it reads> sorry for the sell-out-plug, but people should see all sides before a lemming effect roots. i love the "wind is a bastard", and i've read all of your work you've read maybe one of mine, lazy boy), so i guess that means i actually care, and i'm not just making assumptions. you're an excellent writer, we can't please everyone all the time.now can we???
it means i hate it. possibly you too. Ican't believe you e-mailed me to ask if that meant i liked this or not.
by the way i was the one who gave you a seven here, for the love of god!@
one point for each stanza
are you going to pawn this off to slayer?
nice one! allways like like your stuff im just going to look at your
next one 8/10