Re: If I Had by forsaken	amanda_dcosta 202.164.137.248	18-Jun-06/11:21 PM
There you go again.
Re: Vodka kisses & the final sigh. by SupremeDreamer	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.25.78	18-Jun-06/5:44 PM
illiterate horse dung.
Re: Niggers Don't Write Poetry by pain killer	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.25.78	18-Jun-06/5:45 PM
utter trash. I have shat a better poem.
Re: Mask by sk8boardandpoems	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.25.78	18-Jun-06/5:49 PM
dreary rubbish.
Re: Im different so what? by xblackstarsx	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.25.78	18-Jun-06/5:48 PM
Is this bad intentionally or are you just a moron?
Re: The Last of The Winds by emilyowey	amanda_dcosta 202.164.137.248	18-Jun-06/11:07 PM
Its a nice idea but ends in being an okay-okay poem.
Re: slice of moonlight by lmp	amanda_dcosta 202.164.137.248	19-Jun-06/8:10 AM
Beautiful.... This got straight to my heart.
Re: Field Of Surnames by Caducus	amanda_dcosta 202.164.137.248	18-Jun-06/11:04 PM
Somehow I get the feeling of being in a cemetary.
Re: Ode to necrophilia by Bobjim	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.25.78	18-Jun-06/5:46 PM
Have I read this before? Probably. In someone else's obituary perhaps!
Re: My Ideals by Miggy	amanda_dcosta 202.164.137.248	18-Jun-06/11:14 PM
This is a good. .................And to see that none have voted here yet?
Re: the perils of internet dating by conny lingers	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.25.78	18-Jun-06/5:30 PM
Why not come and give 10/10 to MY poems for a sodding change?
Re: Bumming kiddies by Bobjim	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.25.78	18-Jun-06/5:36 PM
I love bumming! I used to bum so many people until my willy fell off.
Re: Kittens and Pocket Money by Shuushin	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.25.78	18-Jun-06/5:43 PM
Garbage. But semi-intelligent garbage. I shall be generous and score it 1/10.
Re: The Runt by Caducus	amanda_dcosta 202.164.137.248	18-Jun-06/11:11 PM
Cool. Whether real or not, the choice of topic is good. It's like you've put a story to it. Great job.
Re: Mastermind by wOrnella Mutiw	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.25.78	18-Jun-06/5:41 PM
This rather cleverly combines stupidity, illiteracy and total lack of humour. Since I am in a good humour and feeling generous, I shall rate it 1/10.
Re: End by MacFrantic	amanda_dcosta 202.164.137.248	18-Jun-06/10:55 PM
I fell that this could be an excerpt from a story. somehow it gives me an eerie feeling. I don't particularly like death themes esp when settled around brutality.
Re: Be The One by forsaken	amanda_dcosta 202.164.137.248	18-Jun-06/11:20 PM
Looks like you're a loser at love that you're poems are written to beckon someone in particular. It doesn't seem that you've got her. (No offence meant).
Re: A Love Potion by forsaken	amanda_dcosta 202.164.137.248	18-Jun-06/11:18 PM
A nice title. And a good read. But there seems to be no consistencey in time and metre and its as if some lines are like chewing gum. They've been pulled and stretched.
Re: 'Fucky Fucky 5 Dollar' by scitz	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.25.78	18-Jun-06/5:33 PM
This is really excellent. I remember a visit to Bangkok and I found out why the city is so called. I got shagged silly for fewer baht than in a fahrt.
Re: Conny and the Chocolate Factory by conny lingers	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.25.78	18-Jun-06/5:30 PM
I have only had full anal sex in a cinema twice. It meant I missed the funny death scene in "Love Story" but you can't see much when your head is stuck between the seats in front of you can you?