regarding some deleted poem...	richa 81.178.221.104	6-Feb-06/4:48 AM
Why isn't this about muslims.
Re: time (3rd draft) by Adriaan	richa 81.178.221.104	6-Feb-06/4:56 AM
goldfish contemplates raindrops on an autumn pond. (13 syllables) I have saved you four syllables to say something interesting.
regarding some deleted poem...	ALChemy 24.74.100.11	6-Feb-06/5:57 AM
The last line is just slightly cliche. Maybe something mor like "My heart in pursuit".
Re: Sonnet by zodiac	ecargo 167.219.88.140	6-Feb-06/6:51 AM
Interesting approach, decent dismount.
regarding some deleted poem...	richa 81.178.221.104	6-Feb-06/4:47 AM
Doesn't need a title, it's a haiku. 'The' is a wasted syllable in the first line. 'deep' is a bit of a waste too.
regarding some deleted poem...	Caducus 172.216.6.246	6-Feb-06/6:58 AM
I think you could do one musically to Summer Holiday or Daddy's home and think the mix of Cliff Richard and extremists is top notch. As you do that I will put peace on earth on ebay with a starting price of 5 pence. Crazy stuff for a crazy world.
regarding some deleted poem...	richa 81.178.221.104	6-Feb-06/5:03 AM
I don't know what the first two lines are all about or why they have become detached from the rest of the text which by the way is rather good.
Re: (no subject) by whispern_smoke_wisp	Angelicasassy 72.40.4.69	5-Feb-06/7:02 PM
I didn't really like this one
Re: Legless Insecurity by PoeticXTC	Angelicasassy 72.40.4.69	5-Feb-06/7:05 PM
I didn't like this.
Re: Even the elephants by ecargo	Angelicasassy 72.40.4.69	5-Feb-06/7:24 PM
very good.
Re: Count All the Stars by TLRufener	Angelicasassy 72.40.4.69	5-Feb-06/7:27 PM
I liked it. A bit elementary but still good.
Re: Horatio by april fool	Angelicasassy 72.40.4.69	5-Feb-06/7:29 PM
Pretty good.
Re: Sonnet by zodiac	Angelicasassy 72.40.4.69	5-Feb-06/9:57 PM
Now this is poetry!! Congrats, you are my first 10. Well this poem is!!
Re: the inner flame by crwncka1	Angelicasassy 72.40.4.69	5-Feb-06/7:06 PM
not too shabby
Re: Reasons by dancin_n_da_moonlite	Angelicasassy 72.40.4.69	5-Feb-06/7:07 PM
quite good
Re: Cold-Blooded Pillow by drnick	Angelicasassy 72.40.4.69	5-Feb-06/7:08 PM
wow, I like this.
Re: Goldenshoes Shane by dantron	Angelicasassy 72.40.4.69	5-Feb-06/7:15 PM
uhm, I don't like this.
Re: I'm there by amanda_dcosta	zodiac 216.67.6.21	5-Feb-06/8:53 PM
I like it.
Re: An Understanding Woman by Dovina	zodiac 216.67.6.21	5-Feb-06/8:54 PM
This is an exact description of tonight's "Grey's Anatomy".
Re: time (3rd draft) by Adriaan	richa 81.178.221.104	6-Feb-06/4:54 AM
Is this about how one of the dimensions of the universe is visible only to goldfish. If so I agree.