| Re: Screws by helenwales |
Sasha 69.138.240.116 |
22-Sep-04/3:34 PM |
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Helo, here's another welsh poet!
Helo, dyma bardd arall cymreig!
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Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199 |
23-Sep-04/5:22 AM |
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Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199 |
23-Sep-04/5:23 AM |
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redneck_woman3322 216.129.234.23 |
22-Sep-04/3:34 PM |
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An intense poem...one I can honestly relate to...the pressures of life sometimes can become over bearing...
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horus8 24.130.62.63 |
22-Sep-04/3:35 PM |
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I read this to my meatloaf, and it literally moaned.
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| Re: Ghost by Caducus |
horus8 24.130.62.63 |
22-Sep-04/3:42 PM |
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The end fell apart for me, but the beginning was really good stuff.
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| Re: ONCE(revised) by jroday |
horus8 24.130.62.63 |
22-Sep-04/3:54 PM |
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| Re: Scar Gazing by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
horus8 24.130.62.63 |
22-Sep-04/3:59 PM |
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A grammaric nightmare, but there's some salvagable stuff in there, somewhere.
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| Re: A Fistful of Ass Haiku by HaikuMofo |
horus8 24.130.62.63 |
22-Sep-04/4:00 PM |
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horus8 24.130.62.63 |
22-Sep-04/4:01 PM |
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| Re: The Dovina Limericks by Everyone |
horus8 24.130.62.63 |
22-Sep-04/4:02 PM |
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horus8 24.130.62.63 |
22-Sep-04/4:49 PM |
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| Re: Screws by helenwales |
horus8 24.130.62.63 |
22-Sep-04/4:52 PM |
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horus8 24.130.62.63 |
22-Sep-04/4:52 PM |
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Bachus 24.130.62.63 |
22-Sep-04/9:36 PM |
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| Re: Head On by Bachus |
Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199 |
23-Sep-04/5:24 AM |
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| Re: Screws by helenwales |
some deleted user 81.178.202.250 |
23-Sep-04/5:35 AM |
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Being preceded by lines all ending in commas the line break 'the skies above/ me dance' gives me a headache.
The poem has nice sounds. Not sure what 'pressing into me your ice cold' is all about. Perhaps something to do with the morrissey song 'Phallus in a freezer'.
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Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199 |
23-Sep-04/5:37 AM |
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I have just seen your face on your blog and realise why London was so unwelcoming to you. You see you are clearly of the lower to lower middle orders, you have the face of a queer and quite possibly the tattered hoop of a practicising Quendo. Anyone with a face like yours wearing that ghastly orange shirt wandering around central London would rightly be castigated as a foreign pauper who should not be encouraged to come back.
London is quite the best city in the world if you are rich, not a practising homo and have an iota of sartorial elegance - no fucker in an orange shirt with a massively ugly face is going to be admitted anywhere worth going in London. I pity you and your feeble Canadian features.
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| Re: The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose |
titan69 62.31.23.89 |
23-Sep-04/12:41 PM |
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I realy love this poem 10/10
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| Re: They who would have me forget by BleedingRose |
titan69 62.31.23.89 |
23-Sep-04/12:43 PM |
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