regarding some deleted poem...	klosterfobik 152.163.100.195	20-Sep-04/8:35 PM
Shit upon piss in a bag of ass!
Re: Little Dreamer by TLRufener	redneck_woman3322 216.129.234.23	22-Sep-04/3:32 PM
I love this poem....it offers inspiration to many of us...the heart always does know and we can really fly...
regarding some deleted poem...	daggatolar 212.247.106.51	20-Sep-04/5:44 AM
can love beheld on hold, once savoured, .... I think otherwise. but without a two, what then is love, bless your heart, for a quik rescue.
Re: FALLING ASLEEP by AM I EVIL?	redneck_woman3322 216.129.234.159	20-Sep-04/9:54 AM
This is a good poem, I really did like it it's a sad poem...because the last line tells us that the person is gone....a lot more could be added to the poem emotionally if you worked on this one....but it is still very good....( I hope you didn' t mind me giving advise, not the best at it...)
Re: untitled by AM I EVIL?	redneck_woman3322 216.129.234.159	20-Sep-04/9:56 AM
This is a poem I think a lot can relate to...lots of us are unsure of our thoughts at one point in our lives...this one I liked too...
Re: The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose	daggatolar 212.199.251.77	21-Sep-04/5:25 AM
The temptation is you or the poem, i a have feeling of happening\s or is it the title that brings the read to such a high.... life is one hell of a bleeding unend, not when for a woman , this is the very sacrifice life demands of her, painful if then love a smokescreen to cool the nerve or fool her away the truth of life is denied and turns a party in the very game of adding to the pains of humanhood, rose never cease the bleed keep the fire for nothing, for poetry to continue the circle of birth to life.
Re: Old Friends by sliver	redneck_woman3322 216.129.235.132	20-Sep-04/2:10 PM
I thought this poem was absolutely great!
regarding some deleted poem...	redneck_woman3322 216.129.235.132	20-Sep-04/2:15 PM
ohhhhhh a hard lesson to learn...a powerful poem here....
regarding some deleted poem...	daggatolar 212.199.251.77	21-Sep-04/5:35 AM
at least poetry nevers fails us like every other things at times may so do, friends, love..... this poem is a testament to that sacred truth.
regarding some deleted poem...	redneck_woman3322 216.129.233.171	20-Sep-04/7:23 PM
This is beautiful...I think it's more sensous than erotic...and moreso romantic...good job in writing this!
Re: THE GAME by jroday	redneck_woman3322 216.129.233.171	20-Sep-04/7:28 PM
I think it's good lol made me laugh...
regarding some deleted poem...	klosterfobik 152.163.100.195	20-Sep-04/8:31 PM
So saw it coming.-5-
regarding some deleted poem...	klosterfobik 152.163.100.195	20-Sep-04/8:33 PM
Yawn
regarding some deleted poem...	Everyone 213.146.148.199	21-Sep-04/2:21 AM
"My soul cries out with my heart, “ow!”" Crystal, how you manage to still type on the keyboard in spite of the splintering of your fingers owing to your osetoperosis is heroic. That a special desk has been made by your parents so that your thalidomide shortened arms can reach the keyboard is admirable. That inspite of your terribly misshapened face and leaking food pipe you are able to brave the publicity of publishing your work is without rebuke. That you are able to rhyme "ow" with "how" and not opt for the obviousness of "cow" or "wow" shows how far your work as come. Gone are the days when you used to take the easy way out and rhyme "love" with "above"; I should be suprised if critics in the future, in a more enlightened age, trawling the archives of the internet don't define this work as the seminal moment in your career when you cast aside the shackles of mental disability and fully grasped the power of language and the allure of suggestion.
Re: Little Dreamer by TLRufener	daggatolar 212.199.251.77	21-Sep-04/5:44 AM
fly baby fly the only way to keep alive is to keep dreaming. like the kiddish simpilicty.
Re: Solitude by Dovina	thepinkbunnyofdoom 66.213.67.10	21-Sep-04/5:11 PM
Interesting to say the least.
regarding some deleted poem...	wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.253	22-Sep-04/3:16 AM
There once was a lady from Bude Who liked to be lewd in the nude. Her cunt she did fill With a pneumatic drill: 'Twas the fastest she'd ever been screwed.
regarding some deleted poem...	darylchew 202.156.2.130	22-Sep-04/7:00 AM
i like.
Re: A Fistful of Ass Haiku by HaikuMofo	nentwined 66.92.28.14	22-Sep-04/2:08 PM
asstasstic. bonus points for the form of ass, and paradox, and continuity.
Re: Down Memory Lane by darylchew	redneck_woman3322 216.129.234.23	22-Sep-04/3:22 PM
This is great...this last Summer I actually saw an ice cream truck and his little bell was ringing lol I wanted to run after him....ahhh the good ole days....nothing will ever compare to them....definately this poem brought back memories so it is a 10....