| Re: Army Dock (Bangcock in July) (Free Curse) by Rug by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
some deleted user 172.145.75.64 |
17-Sep-04/7:32 PM |
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You're a sheer and complete asshole.
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| Re: My Magical Beat Poem With Stolen Black Music by horus8 |
klosterfobik 152.163.100.195 |
18-Sep-04/8:01 PM |
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| Re: Who are the best poets on poemranker? (A list by me) by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
some deleted user 172.145.75.64 |
17-Sep-04/7:46 PM |
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You're such a fuckin' fraud!!!
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redneck_woman3322 216.129.235.40 |
18-Sep-04/7:45 PM |
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I loved this poem! Heartfelt and right to the point...honest, sincere and very direct are the emotions I felt in this poem....well written...
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| Re: the thrill to kill by AM I EVIL? |
redneck_woman3322 216.129.235.40 |
18-Sep-04/7:48 PM |
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Actually, it is really good..this sounds like it could actually become a song....very powerful this poem is....
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| Re: A Quick Lick Of Yellow by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
some deleted user 172.145.75.64 |
17-Sep-04/8:02 PM |
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| Re: A Kiss Beneath The Blossom Tree by Caducus |
Skytiger 202.124.102.87 |
18-Sep-04/4:24 AM |
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Your Mum and Dad would be proud...
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Skytiger 202.124.102.87 |
18-Sep-04/4:40 AM |
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The more I read over this poem, the more my emotions are stirred and I'm reminded of a lost love. Your writing is heartfelt and very real - loved it.
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| Re: crash&burn by AM I EVIL? |
redneck_woman3322 216.129.235.40 |
18-Sep-04/7:50 PM |
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You leave the reader anxious to find out the outcome...lots of mystery in your poems...this one I liked too....
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| Re: Play by Lifeboatman |
horus8 24.130.62.63 |
17-Sep-04/10:44 PM |
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Vivid, and pleasantly wicked. -=10=-
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Skytiger 202.124.102.87 |
18-Sep-04/3:56 AM |
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Very cool lyrics, luv to hear the song...ahhh, the good old days!
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Skytiger 202.124.102.87 |
18-Sep-04/4:00 AM |
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Don't be put off by my meagre vote. Lyrics can be hard to judge when not backed by music.
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Skytiger 202.124.102.87 |
18-Sep-04/4:13 AM |
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You and I have something in common - we write as we experience and feel things. I understand completely what you mean in your poem, but it kinda rambles a little. Understandably, it's hard to sum up an experience that leaves one feeling lost, but perhaps you could shorten the length of the poem by altering the layout. Does that make any sense?
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| Re: I Win. by LintyWeenis |
LintyWeenis 64.12.117.13 |
18-Sep-04/8:39 AM |
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This was written in memory of all the poems, stories, songs and journals lost in the mysterious erasing of the one folder than held them all. *drinks my poison* Here's to you.
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| Re: The Mirror by berdabear |
AM I EVIL? 24.71.61.94 |
18-Sep-04/11:14 AM |
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ouch thats harsh,but u can feel the hate and thats great..........but i hope its not true it would be a waste of talent
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AM I EVIL? 24.71.61.94 |
18-Sep-04/11:17 AM |
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fuckin great...i liked it all,rhymes rythym flow its great
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AM I EVIL? 24.71.61.94 |
18-Sep-04/11:19 AM |
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so far im lovin your work...keep going... ill keep reading
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| Re: Drunk and Fucked Up by wilco |
AM I EVIL? 24.71.61.94 |
18-Sep-04/11:26 AM |
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i think it was great could be a great song
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electroman1979 198.81.26.16 |
18-Sep-04/3:59 PM |
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good poem, keep up the good work
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| Re: AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
PeRsIaN^StAr 203.164.186.229 |
18-Sep-04/8:02 PM |
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hey dark angel
ur sarcasm intrigues me, but most of all it makes me laugh. people like u in australia are what are known as "classics", let me elaborate on that for u. i noe for a fact that u dnt care what people rite about u. in fact u appreciate when people jugde u because u find joy in giving them more of a reason to hate u by ur replies. this isnt about the aids issue because im soooooo over it that im under it. (literally). its about moral ethics. i can assure myself that i am at least half ur age and yet my level of maturity seems to be soo much higher. if u have nothing better to do then to sit here and make poems which make absolutely no sense then go for it, who is anyone to stop u. im glad i got the message to u and id like to thank you for reading my 1st message without 'prejudice'. im just waiting for the day u click with reality cuz u obviously noe ur facts about aids, which i must say, even though u use in a sarcastic tone tends to impress me about ur knowledge.so have a greeat day and 'TEARGAS_HEADLIGHTS' tahnks for ur reply.
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