| Re: corrupting me by skaskowski |
Brandy_n_Cali 4.182.254.104 |
10-Sep-04/5:35 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
klosterfobik 64.12.116.140 |
10-Sep-04/7:19 PM |
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Quite nice...brings back memories. -8-
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klosterfobik 64.12.116.140 |
10-Sep-04/7:58 PM |
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A bit jagged but very good. -8-
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| Re: Las Gaviotas by Bachus |
unnesessary 64.12.116.140 |
10-Sep-04/10:24 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
some deleted user 65.172.117.1 |
10-Sep-04/8:25 AM |
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apperently i can edit and comment on this while loged out, but not when loged in, how did you post?
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| Re: Soft and Pure by Dovina |
Dan garcia-Black 66.159.232.164 |
10-Sep-04/8:09 AM |
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"Stroking his brows of sandy shade,
that earliest smoothness
with mustache and hair graying."
The poem starts here for me.
"A belief, a certainty?"
Everything you are trying to say in the first 2 1/2 lines should be told in this line.
Love the last stanza.
But criticism aside. It's a -10- as is.
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sir_heff 65.172.117.1 |
10-Sep-04/8:22 AM |
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java.sql.SQLException: ERROR: Cannot insert a duplicate key into unique index core_users_email_key
at org.postgresql.core.QueryExecutor.execute(QueryExecutor.java:94)
at org.postgresql.Connection.ExecSQL(Connection.java:398)
at org.postgresql.jdbc2.Statement.execute(Statement.java:130)
at org.postgresql.jdbc2.Statement.executeUpdate(Statement.java:73)
at org.postgresql.jdbc2.PreparedStatement.executeUpdate(PreparedStatement.java:113)
at com.poemranker.Bean.save(Bean.java:83)
at com.poemranker.Vote.resetAverage(Vote.java:186)
at com.poemranker.Vote.vote(Vote.java:215)
at _poem_22dvote_22dprocess__jsp._jspService(_poem_22dvote_22dprocess__jsp.java:154)
at com.caucho.jsp.JavaPage.service(JavaPage.java:75)
at com.caucho.jsp.Page.subservice(Page.java:506)
at com.caucho.server.http.FilterChainPage.doFilter(FilterChainPage.java:182)
at com.caucho.server.http.Invocation.service(Invocation.java:315)
at com.caucho.server.http.CacheInvocation.service(CacheInvocation.java:135)
at com.caucho.server.http.HttpRequest.handleRequest(HttpRequest.java:246)
at com.caucho.server.http.HttpRequest.handleConnection(HttpRequest.java:164)
at com.caucho.server.TcpConnection.run(TcpConnection.java:139)
at java.lang.Thread.run(Thread.java:534)
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
some deleted user 65.172.117.1 |
10-Sep-04/8:29 AM |
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wow that was easyer than i was expecting... just log out before you post..... this is kinda interisting...
---sir heff
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| Re: Openings by sir_heff |
sir_heff 65.172.117.1 |
10-Sep-04/8:40 AM |
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i wrote this with my g/f, she wrote the first line, i did the second and so on...
she thinks i f*cked the ending up...
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some deleted user 195.157.153.253 |
10-Sep-04/8:46 AM |
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Wow. You can edit my posts without logging in. How cool.
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| Re: Soft and Pure by Dovina |
edpeterson 68.79.2.62 |
10-Sep-04/10:17 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Dovina 24.52.157.176 |
10-Sep-04/11:03 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Dovina 24.52.157.176 |
10-Sep-04/9:27 PM |
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Almost all the trees cut for pulp and paper are grown on farms. To say we should save a tree by using less paper is like saying we should eat less corn.
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Dovina 24.52.157.176 |
10-Sep-04/11:15 AM |
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I like "hyperactive serpent on a sibilant slither." A bit strange in spacing and language at the end though.
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| Re: corrupting me by skaskowski |
Dovina 24.52.157.176 |
10-Sep-04/11:57 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
some deleted user 147.226.170.249 |
10-Sep-04/3:02 PM |
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You are too funny sometimes. Did someone make you angry regarding your firewood business?
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| Re: Often, I'll sit down to pee by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
unnesessary 64.12.116.140 |
10-Sep-04/10:22 PM |
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I think my seven year old wrote this????
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| Re: Lost by arduinn |
sliver 63.189.16.39 |
10-Sep-04/3:59 PM |
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Well, it appears that two of my poems have made their way to Arduinn's favorites list. To what do I owe this fine pleasure? thank you for the compliment!
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
sliver 63.189.16.39 |
10-Sep-04/4:02 PM |
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The hath just doesn't seem to fit.Replace him with her and I may as well have written this one.
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sliver 63.189.16.39 |
10-Sep-04/4:04 PM |
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Good poem Bratsy. If more people prayed to the Blessed Virgin for her intercession, this world might not be such a mess.
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