Re: Mr Blobby V skooby doo!! by MR Blobby	wilco 66.162.22.123	17-Jul-04/3:16 PM
bloody hell.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 24.52.157.176	18-Jul-04/10:38 AM
Good. I'd take out "the" before sun in two places, and "murders of crows"?
Re: Countdown by TearsOnRoses	Dovina 24.52.157.176	18-Jul-04/10:43 AM
It seems the numbers are there to rhyme, unless I'm missing something. Last two lines are good.
Re: Old Friends by sliver	TearsOnRoses 66.73.129.89	18-Jul-04/7:37 AM
Beautiful poem. :)
Re: Frozen Angel by Ranger	TearsOnRoses 66.73.129.89	18-Jul-04/7:41 AM
Beautiful poem. :)
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 24.52.157.176	17-Jul-04/11:58 AM
Ambiguous, since "proof" could go either way. Why not "He" in the first line, or even leave out "recently" as redundent. Is "battery of" needed?
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 24.52.157.176	17-Jul-04/12:01 PM
Title: Exploitation.com
Re: Divorcing Tennessee by Dovina	wilco 66.162.22.123	17-Jul-04/3:15 PM
Captured perfectly and beautifully.
regarding some deleted poem...	?-Dave_Mysterious-? 80.42.89.53	17-Jul-04/4:27 PM
Title suggestion: "Pike County Breakdown"
Re: Divorcing Tennessee by Dovina	?-Dave_Mysterious-? 80.42.89.53	17-Jul-04/4:44 PM
In High Wycombe, there is a fast food restaurant called Tennessee Fried Chicken. The most hilarious joke you can do, I you're feeling bored on a Saturday night, is to go in there and ask for directions to Kentucky Fried Chicken. Or so I am told.
regarding some deleted poem...	richa 81.178.242.35	18-Jul-04/6:18 AM
It is well written, but the idea behind it seems a kind of vague portentiousness. I believe that is why you are having a problem with the title.
Re: Squeeze it out... by mrpresident	TearsOnRoses 66.73.129.89	18-Jul-04/7:09 AM
That was interesting...
Re: An Old Man's Folly (from the diaries of Dave Q. Mysterious) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	horus8 24.130.62.63	17-Jul-04/6:04 PM
That's Art 11!
Re: Mr Blobby V skooby doo!! by MR Blobby	horus8 24.130.62.63	17-Jul-04/6:06 PM
No
regarding some deleted poem...	horus8 24.130.62.63	17-Jul-04/6:07 PM
Fizz
Re: Divorcing Tennessee by Dovina	horus8 24.130.62.63	17-Jul-04/6:08 PM
I surf Dana Point... Go Killer Dana! Fuck the red triangle though; too cold up there.
regarding some deleted poem...	titan69 213.48.172.3	18-Jul-04/12:10 AM
good poem!!
Re: An Old Man's Folly (from the diaries of Dave Q. Mysterious) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	titan69 213.48.172.3	18-Jul-04/12:13 AM
wow! thats so strange love it !!
regarding some deleted poem...	Dan garcia-Black 66.159.232.44	17-Jul-04/9:02 AM
Thank you, both.
regarding some deleted poem...	?-Dave_Mysterious-? 80.42.73.90	17-Jul-04/9:04 AM
At 50 you would have to be well lubricated.