| Re: Shamefaced by Doug |
Dan garcia-Black 64.161.176.239 |
17-Jun-04/7:59 PM |
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I like the idea and the follow through. I trip over some of the images in line five. I think you mean "You're sure to know Him" right? -8-
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| Re: The Freemasons by Bachus |
ARTIE 66.68.146.139 |
17-Jun-04/10:14 PM |
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Ever read "Sarum" by Edward Rutherfurd? Those [eventual] Masons "Rocked" the free World to come. Satan and Pagan ruled for centuries. Embrace an Icon??? Stonehenge is offlimits now.
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| Re: West Coast Epilogue (Pseudo Triolet) by wilco |
ARTIE 66.68.146.139 |
17-Jun-04/10:23 PM |
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Wuz "you" really right..??..even if you'd never been to Calif?
No sand in your shorts? I was enthralled by the West Coast promenade many years ago, but, I had no right to stay. Good vote to you.
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| Re: 0 by MacFrantic |
MacFrantic 198.81.26.16 |
17-Jun-04/10:24 PM |
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First two comments from bad limerick
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| Re: 0 by MacFrantic |
Blindpoetry 68.226.128.193 |
17-Jun-04/11:26 PM |
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I don't get how 0 relates to the poem. 0.o;
But i like it.
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| Re: Origins by Doug |
Shuushin 147.154.235.53 |
18-Jun-04/4:24 AM |
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The only complaint I have, and its more of an observation - is that the players seem somewhat arbitary.
I mean why not "Desperation" or "Futility" or "Esctacy" (etc.)?
The title alone doesn't serve well enough to establish the setting.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Shuushin 147.154.235.53 |
18-Jun-04/4:25 AM |
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| Re: Of Gifts by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
wilco 24.176.102.131 |
17-Jun-04/4:04 PM |
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| Re: love and hate by jessicasgurl |
sliver 63.190.80.219 |
17-Jun-04/4:11 PM |
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| Re: A Flower for Monet by Shuushin |
sliver 63.190.80.219 |
17-Jun-04/4:18 PM |
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Yes Yes, cudos. Very well done
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| Re: Of Gifts by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
Bachus 24.130.62.63 |
17-Jun-04/4:50 PM |
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Mtv, and then perhaps, a tidy bowl commercial.
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| Re: West Coast Epilogue (Pseudo Triolet) by wilco |
Bachus 24.130.62.63 |
17-Jun-04/5:02 PM |
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Rodavlas 151.199.227.122 |
17-Jun-04/5:35 PM |
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| Re: Chin-up by Rodavlas |
Jeremi B. Handrinos 24.130.62.63 |
17-Jun-04/6:20 PM |
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Don't forget your listerine.
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| Re: Bankruptcy by INTRANSIT |
thepinkbunnyofdoom 216.196.147.70 |
17-Jun-04/7:07 PM |
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So much said, so few words word.
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| Re: West Coast Epilogue (Pseudo Triolet) by wilco |
thepinkbunnyofdoom 216.196.147.70 |
17-Jun-04/7:12 PM |
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Next time you choose an incredible place not to go, try and make it little more map dot as it were. Way more could be said about California. I'll leave it at that.
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| Re: Chin-up by Rodavlas |
zodiac 65.161.41.48 |
17-Jun-04/7:22 PM |
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| Re: The Freemasons by Bachus |
thepinkbunnyofdoom 216.196.148.56 |
17-Jun-04/12:54 PM |
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Ow! Ow! Do the Illuminati Next!!! Or C.E.R.N., Inventing the Internet. At least get into the Wonderous decussion of Peak Oil?! Anti-matter!?! Bio-Organics perhaps? Or anything Else Mentioned In "ANGELS AND DEMONS" by Dan Brown.
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| Re: Blinking by zodiac |
edpeterson 68.79.25.2 |
17-Jun-04/2:37 PM |
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brilliant, brilliant stuff here.
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| Re: West Coast Epilogue (Pseudo Triolet) by wilco |
wilco 24.176.102.131 |
17-Jun-04/2:40 PM |
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