Re: a comment on Hide by MarchingMan56	MarchingMan56 209.74.26.236	24-Feb-05/5:16 PM
No. I don't understand what you mean. I CONFUSED!!!
Re: a comment on Hide by MarchingMan56	horus8 24.130.62.63	24-Feb-05/3:50 PM
Is that a trick question?
Re: a comment on Hide by MarchingMan56	MarchingMan56 209.74.26.236	24-Feb-05/3:36 PM
What's that supposed to mean???
Re: They that do not scream by INTRANSIT	Dovina 17.255.240.6	24-Feb-05/1:04 PM
Yeah, good point. Ignore the screaming malcontents with their petty little gripes and open the window for the mantis.
Re: a comment on My word, her word, and yours by thepinkbunnyofdoom	thepinkbunnyofdoom 66.42.251.54	24-Feb-05/10:57 AM
Yeah, the entire second stanza is great.
Re: a comment on Into the Wreckage by zodiac	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	24-Feb-05/8:44 AM
What?
Re: a comment on Invisible Wounds by Fearlesfan_04	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	24-Feb-05/8:41 AM
You can be such a bitch.
Re: Invisible Wounds by Fearlesfan_04	Dovina 12.72.5.145	24-Feb-05/8:36 AM
Okay you have wounds, but that's about all it says. Fancy spacing and repetition cannot make it better.
Re: The End of the Affair by jessicazee	Dovina 12.72.5.145	24-Feb-05/8:34 AM
Scratch the first line. Line break after "teeth." I like this a lot!
Re: My word, her word, and yours by thepinkbunnyofdoom	Dovina 12.72.5.145	24-Feb-05/8:19 AM
These coded interactions are interesting for riddle and bravery to risk discovery. Among the angst though are a few good lines - "Fact wrapped around fiction" because it's the opposite of the usual fiction wrapped around fact.
Re: a comment on Hunger by Dovina	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	24-Feb-05/7:14 AM
I imagine they droop below her pubes, which isn't hard as they stretch as high as her chin.
Re: a comment on My word, her word, and yours by thepinkbunnyofdoom	thepinkbunnyofdoom 69.61.151.161	24-Feb-05/3:14 AM
Really, what good have my words done the for starving children in Africa. Until the previous sentence nothing, and even then, they merely point out the existance of starving children in Africa. Our words mean what we want them to mean, and nothing more, nothing less. In this case, nothing at all. <3 Jason
Re: Hunter Thompson, In The Off Beat Chance Of Cunnilingus by horus8	Crakyamuni 131.252.183.26	23-Feb-05/7:58 PM
Honestly I'm illiterate, but goddamn, this was an inspiration. I have never read anything as good on this site. This may be an insult to you blue bloods, but I'm in love with this poem.
Re: Hunter Thompson, In The Off Beat Chance Of Cunnilingus by horus8	Crakyamuni 131.252.183.26	23-Feb-05/7:55 PM
That was insane.
Re: My word, her word, and yours by thepinkbunnyofdoom	Crakyamuni 131.252.183.26	23-Feb-05/7:51 PM
A sense of "doom" here. I like that. Our words mean everything, especially "mine". Paint it black and "red", and add a bunny with a snake body.
Re: Into the Wreckage by zodiac	Dreammaker1024 198.146.102.83	23-Feb-05/5:28 PM
I enjoyed it, More than I you know. There are ways I would like to explain what I think of it to u, but I doubt they would do justice. So I'll leave it at this; beyond mere idea.
Re: a comment on Mistress of Dreams by Dreammaker1024	Dreammaker1024 198.146.102.83	23-Feb-05/5:20 PM
The first three verses are about the 3 things in my life that I adore and that I let into "me". So in their palms they hold me, they hold everything that I feel, think, know.
Re: Hunger by Dovina	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 82.39.21.223	23-Feb-05/4:16 PM
Are your breasts floppy?
Re: Hunter Thompson, In The Off Beat Chance Of Cunnilingus by horus8	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 82.39.21.223	23-Feb-05/4:11 PM
My favourite bit is "Geffen passed around a wooden box full of drugs."
Re: Hide by MarchingMan56	horus8 24.130.62.63	23-Feb-05/2:14 PM
The way you re-write cliche is... Cliche.