| Re: a comment on My Wife by Dovina |
Dovina 69.175.6.101 |
29-Dec-04/7:16 PM |
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Are you the real jroday, back from surgery? If so, welcome back. You once talked about a mean woman. Iâve taken the manâs side here and am pleased if it rings true to you.
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| Re: a comment on My Wife by Dovina |
Dovina 69.175.6.101 |
29-Dec-04/7:15 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Distance by Lifeboatman |
Lifeboatman 203.104.94.2 |
29-Dec-04/7:09 PM |
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| Re: Road Tripped by Blindpoetry |
Lifeboatman 203.104.94.2 |
29-Dec-04/7:06 PM |
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| Re: Jealous over a maybe by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
Lifeboatman 203.104.94.2 |
29-Dec-04/7:00 PM |
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I don't know why others voted that way... maybe they think they are so smart to realize how stupid they really are.. great one you have here.. 10...
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| Re: Distance by Lifeboatman |
Bhaskaryya 61.0.144.54 |
29-Dec-04/7:00 PM |
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| Re: My Wife by Dovina |
Bhaskaryya 61.0.144.54 |
29-Dec-04/6:56 PM |
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HaHa!!! Great poem!! Very much like a breathe of fresh air on the site.
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| Re: My Wife by Dovina |
Lifeboatman 203.104.94.2 |
29-Dec-04/6:55 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Distance by Lifeboatman |
Lifeboatman 203.104.94.2 |
29-Dec-04/6:51 PM |
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Oh it just means that I am but a part of her past and may just play a minimal role or maybe nothing in her future...
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| Re: My Wife by Dovina |
jroday 204.215.34.234 |
29-Dec-04/5:07 PM |
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This is a wonderful poem to me. It brings back a lot of memories.
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| Re: Fear by auscot |
Dovina 69.175.6.101 |
29-Dec-04/2:11 PM |
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I'm surprised you didn't get more comments and votes. The only detraction I see is the grave of fear in the mind. Grave implies death of fear, but the rest of the poem talks of a fight with it and then again at the end, putting it in the grave. But fear is never completely dead. A good poem overall.
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| Re: a comment on Betwixt and In Between by dougsoderstrom |
Blindpoetry 68.11.192.79 |
29-Dec-04/12:37 PM |
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My Gawd
If your referring to my last post, that is............ that you try to find my sarcasm.
Spence
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| Re: a comment on Betwixt and In Between by dougsoderstrom |
dougsoderstrom 207.80.112.12 |
29-Dec-04/12:13 PM |
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Dear Blindpoetry,
I suggest , if you are referring to the activity of "whemying," that is................ that you try such a practice in private where you will be less likely to be seen by others.
Doug
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| Re: a comment on Betwixt and In Between by dougsoderstrom |
dougsoderstrom 207.80.112.12 |
29-Dec-04/12:10 PM |
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Dear Zodiac:
Thanks for the kind response to my piece.
Love,
Doug
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| Re: a comment on Betwixt and In Between by dougsoderstrom |
dougsoderstrom 207.80.112.12 |
29-Dec-04/11:49 AM |
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Thank you very much for the kind words.
Doug
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| Re: a comment on Betwixt and In Between by dougsoderstrom |
dougsoderstrom 207.80.112.12 |
29-Dec-04/11:48 AM |
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Very nicely said, Dovina.
Your friend,
Doug
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| Re: a comment on Jealous over a maybe by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
thepinkbunnyofdoom 66.161.179.102 |
29-Dec-04/11:37 AM |
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No one said literate, and this is what I'd call a shitty off the top of my head poem. Sucks but meh? Its not I love you... I hate you... I can't live without you, so why I write about how wonderful you were shite. As for whether or not I lost her, that remains to be seen.
<3 Jason
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| Re: Jealous over a maybe by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
Dovina 69.175.6.101 |
29-Dec-04/11:12 AM |
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Lost her eh? Too smooth and stylish maybe. Couldn't prove it by the way you spelled smooth, what's and you're.
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| Re: a comment on Distance by Lifeboatman |
Dovina 69.175.6.101 |
29-Dec-04/10:38 AM |
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Yes, Verse 2 especially escapes me.
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| Re: a comment on Math Poem 2 by Dovina |
Dovina 69.175.6.101 |
29-Dec-04/10:29 AM |
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I would like to see that poem.
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