CommentsComments 25381–25400 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Delicate Was by klosterfobik 15 Sep 2004, 2:41 PM
Yes, but then he's using 'was' as a noun. Which he denies. Which is the whole motherfucking point. There is nothing wrong with using 'was' as a noun for poetic effect - e e bummings does stuff like that in some of his poemes (e.g 'anyone lived in a pretty how town'). But to use 'was' as a noun whilst thinking you're using it as an adverb is obviously bosh.
<{Baba^Yaga}> replying on Corner of 30th and Tibbs by klosterfobik 15 Sep 2004, 2:39 PM
No...
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Corner of 30th and Tibbs by klosterfobik 15 Sep 2004, 2:38 PM
A shanked nigger on fire toppling nude from the third pier at Dodger Stadium screaming "Let me axe you sumpin..."
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Inquietude by klosterfobik 15 Sep 2004, 2:36 PM
Another lukewarm pint of goat urine.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Penumbra by klosterfobik 15 Sep 2004, 2:35 PM
A spoiled wedge of head cheese oddly shaped like Uranus.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Eagledale Drive by klosterfobik 15 Sep 2004, 2:34 PM
Craparoni soufle
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Delicate Was by klosterfobik 15 Sep 2004, 2:34 PM
A squid sticking out of your obese wife's ass, begging for sperm whale.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Delicate Was by klosterfobik 15 Sep 2004, 2:33 PM
A chinese cookie stuffed with shit peanuts.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Disregardance by klosterfobik 15 Sep 2004, 2:31 PM
An ass shaped chin flecked with enbrowning sauce.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Disregardance by klosterfobik 15 Sep 2004, 2:30 PM
A piping hot pound of smegma.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Coldfront by klosterfobik 15 Sep 2004, 2:29 PM
A shitaco with extra sour cream
<{Baba^Yaga}> replying on My Magical Beat Poem With Stolen Black Music by horus8 15 Sep 2004, 2:26 PM
I think you meant "you're"!!!! but GOOD one!!!
some deleted user on Secada (Parody of sasha's lying vagina) by Bachus 15 Sep 2004, 2:25 PM
Moron!
some deleted user on The Freemasons by Bachus 15 Sep 2004, 2:24 PM
Please.
some deleted user on Lynched by Bachus 15 Sep 2004, 2:20 PM
An ass full of nonsense - sitting on a chair shit!!!!
some deleted user replying on Haunted by Bachus 15 Sep 2004, 2:16 PM
Did you eat the paint chips?
jroday on Black Love by Faulk 15 Sep 2004, 2:15 PM
I KNOW JUST HOW YOU FEEL @#%$#@##$$$#@#$%^&*(#$%^&*#$%^&amp;&% AND SOME
some deleted user on My Magical Beat Poem With Stolen Black Music by horus8 15 Sep 2004, 2:13 PM
Your a complete fool!!!!!
unnesessary on Jesus, I funneled enough beer to marry that? by Bachus 15 Sep 2004, 1:39 PM
Pure shit.
unnesessary on Secada (Parody of sasha's lying vagina) by Bachus 15 Sep 2004, 1:36 PM
A page of shit!!!!