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Dovina replying on Licking An Ashtray by Blindpoetry 13 Sep 2004, 9:36 AM
Suppose the science table were turned and the results showed that smoking improves health. You would then have two good arguments: “I enjoy smoking,” and “Smoking is good for me and our secondhand smoke is good for you damn nonsmokers.” The only argument I would have is, “I don’t like to smoke and I don’t like secondhand smoke.” In its present state of development, science happens to make me look like a prudent prude and you a happy-go-lucky fun-seeker. Except for a referee that has changed from alchemy to chemistry and earth-centered to sun-centered, we feed each other the same argument. We agree on a good glass of red wine, let science be damned. To agreement. (clink) Cheers.
Dan garcia-Black on Run Material Girl by singinkygal 13 Sep 2004, 8:41 AM
Almost perfect.
darylchew on Daddy by LintyWeenis 13 Sep 2004, 6:24 AM
this world is cold.
zodiac replying on Disregardance by klosterfobik 13 Sep 2004, 3:25 AM
Of course not. I'm from North Carolina, I just happen to live in the deserts of Islamica now, where even the suggestion of being from Israel would be enough to get me a prompt 'melon treatment' from all the villagefolk. Thanks for trying, though, and way to misspell Israel!
zodiac replying on Delicate Was by klosterfobik 13 Sep 2004, 3:19 AM
Hey, congratulations on replying to your own comment, and in an extraordinary dim fashion matched only by the dimness of your original comment. Let's leave it at this, klosterfobik: If was was an adverb, it would still be improperly used, since a) an adjective (like "delicate") can't modify an adverb, b) you're using it as a noun, and c) IT'S NOT AN ADVERB, dumbass, it's a linking verb (i.e., a form of 'to be'). Dim, dim, dim
Jezabele-In-Hell on ... by Jezabele-In-Hell 12 Sep 2004, 9:02 PM
Interesting. I am not familiar with the fallacies of Cartesian Materialism...but would love to learn about them. Can you explain them?
patty t on Ichobod Racecar by T. Jonathron Remp 12 Sep 2004, 6:15 PM
don't they call themselves the 'roma'? -9-
patty t on Your Embrace by Brandy_n_Cali 12 Sep 2004, 6:10 PM
more than just a friendly game of twister -9- but why the change from 'you' to 'him'?
Dovina on Grandpa's boat by Caducus 12 Sep 2004, 3:14 PM
Right. Good.
Yea, I've felt like that, the haunting love of divinity, into the mystical world. Why is that? Good poem.
Dovina replying on A Choice by Dovina 12 Sep 2004, 3:01 PM
And why, kind Prince, might that be?
horus8 replying on Lord Byron Gave Mary Her Shelly by horus8 12 Sep 2004, 2:00 PM
How inventive... I'm really impressed with how imaginative you've become. Why you feel the need to carry on your pitiful attempts at witt and wry humor at your own expense of sounding utterly retarded is quite bold, carry on. Also, I'm not self published. You can buy my book on Amazon it's called Juno's Peacock knock yourself out. I'm sorry it has to be this way, but I've never really been into you or your writing, and this latest attempt at love on your part makes me feel uncomfortable, please forgive me, but I can't see you anymore. As for my mother... Dead, my children... Beautiful and on my lap, eternally. Now go fuck yourself eskimo.
LintyWeenis on Grandpa's boat by Caducus 12 Sep 2004, 1:33 PM
Ooh. This made me feel something. Good :)
Prince of Void on Daddy by LintyWeenis 12 Sep 2004, 1:32 PM
this's a nice poem
LintyWeenis on Down Drown by LintyWeenis 12 Sep 2004, 1:26 PM
I wrote this about a friend of mine who we'll call "Jack". Jack and his girlfriend as so messed up and so I wrote this not exactly for him, but about him. Having screwy friends is inspiration in a hand basket.
Dan garcia-Black on Grandpa's boat by Caducus 12 Sep 2004, 1:24 PM
Yeah!
Thank you a lot ...yeah You are right that's "seized".
Thank you a lot ..yeah u are right that is "seized"?
LintyWeenis on Daddy by LintyWeenis 12 Sep 2004, 1:18 PM
Yea, I stopped putting spaces after he walked in the room on purpose. Good eye, Garcia :) About the drive-way thing, that was me being stupid in Typoville. But! Being that I also reside in Lazeonia, it will go unchanged. But thank you for bringing it to my attention.
Prince of Void on Litany by zodiac 12 Sep 2004, 1:17 PM
very good poem..i love this poem