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Brandy_n_Cali replying on Dads are suppose to stay by Brandy_n_Cali 21 Aug 2004, 7:51 PM
im not quite sure what that means lol
All the world’s an illusion
You are aware that one can order in viagra, correct?
horus8 on Cold Nights In Ohio by Fear of Garbage 21 Aug 2004, 3:07 PM
What? Move.
horus8 replying on Tonight At The Dead Man's Ball by dougsoderstrom 21 Aug 2004, 3:06 PM
Amazing, that should really do the trick!
horus8 on if i had a nickel by fair12 21 Aug 2004, 3:04 PM
You're funny... So what you're saying is that with enough happy thought focusing we can all fly off to Uranus, brilliant.
Thanks for the help. I changed "one's" to "ones." Doug
horus8 on Dads are suppose to stay by Brandy_n_Cali 21 Aug 2004, 1:38 PM
a tic turd on high whip.
dougsoderstrom replying on Tonight At The Dead Man's Ball by dougsoderstrom 21 Aug 2004, 9:49 AM
Thanks, Dovina and a good suggestion...... I'll send a copy of my poem to George B. to find out if he would like to use my piece for, shall we say, "a kind of theme" for his covention.
Dovina on Dads are suppose to stay by Brandy_n_Cali 21 Aug 2004, 7:23 AM
The thought is good, but the poem could use more of the devices that attract someone unfamiliar with you and your subject. I often say that the spirit of a poem is more important than it's form, but here form is lacking. You've got the hard part, the rest is easy.
klosterfobik replying on Corner of 30th and Tibbs by klosterfobik 20 Aug 2004, 10:15 PM
No, I think punctuation is used by talentless grammar snobs to make them seem more literate(at least on this site).Its the technicality of punctuation that makes it artless, not the fact that it clarifies - clarification is the whole point of punctuation you freakin' moron!Instead of trying to defend your lack of thought, you might consider doing something about it. Like,I don't know, maybe learning how to express yourself.
Brandy_n_Cali on Life by camperdfl 20 Aug 2004, 3:45 PM
nice!! I like it! But hey keep your head up!
i had a hard time following it too maybe you should re-word some of it
some deleted user on Q For Some Reason by MacFrantic 20 Aug 2004, 2:42 PM
I bet no one has read this without scratching thier head. Next time, write one about swallowing shot-puts for no reason. 9.
Not bad, like a lyric, could be sung at the opening of the Republican convention.
dougsoderstrom on R.I.P (Epitaphs) by MacFrantic 20 Aug 2004, 12:46 PM
Sordid....... but rather nicely said!
cat replying on Mississippi Burnin. by SupremeDreamer 20 Aug 2004, 12:25 PM
dear zodiac, Britishist, what the hell does that mean, I simply was validating Richa's superiority to those around him, I've heard of anglophile, but Britishist, does this mean I do or do not like British people, well I do like the boys they make good masters... I thought I finished hurting your feelings on my page. Most is a save for your information tenderhearted human: Definition of qualifier- A word or phrase that qualifies, limits, or modifies the meaning of another word or phrase. That translates into save. Oh I get it you don't understand what someone is saying unless it's taken word from word from a book Why don't you go back and comment on your 3078th poem. Silly human, I will be waiting for your response. I do my business in the passenger seat of your car. meow, cat oh since you like the whole post script thing. i'd bet all my catnip that richa and dark angel are involved in some kind of relationship or live together, i'm sure of that, i guess you don't get the whole male female relationship dynamic, because you are single, because you are too busy on poemranker...lololol
Dovina on R.I.P (Epitaphs) by MacFrantic 20 Aug 2004, 10:35 AM
The first verse is great, says it all.
Enchantres on R.I.P (Epitaphs) by MacFrantic 20 Aug 2004, 7:33 AM
Great poem, it made me smile.
caitydee replying on don't feel by caitydee 19 Aug 2004, 8:02 PM
I don't know...live and learn I guess...I was probably a bit harsh, I got heated in the moment you know? So it probably wasn't completely worthless..but who knows! :)