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MR Blobby on Closed Doors by the indign 11 Jul 2004, 12:58 AM
blobby blob!!
MR Blobby on On the Space of Indifference by MacFrantic 11 Jul 2004, 12:57 AM
blobby blob!!
MR Blobby on Ruler of My World by nothingtoanyone 11 Jul 2004, 12:56 AM
blobby!
MR Blobby on Dylan's Odyssey. by Don-Quixote 11 Jul 2004, 12:54 AM
Blobby blob?
MR Blobby on Ze invsible limerick by DR Limerick 11 Jul 2004, 12:52 AM
Blobby?
Don-Quixote on There's Always Sunday by Shardik 11 Jul 2004, 12:29 AM
Fucking beautiful. It's on my favorites. It haunts me. It kills me. fucker.
SupremeDreamer replying on Dylan's Odyssey. by Don-Quixote 11 Jul 2004, 12:24 AM
Ditty? hrmm.. maybe, but I don't think I'd be the man to do it. btw: Monitory, adjective - def: Serving to warn.
SupremeDreamer replying on Sugared petrol isn't sweet if your ass is black & blue. by Y2kSlamPoet 11 Jul 2004, 12:21 AM
Well its not like I post such stuff often.. or at all.. sheesh. So I've indulged myself once. :P Thanks for your comments.
MacFrantic on Ellis Evans: Rhyfel- War by Sasha 10 Jul 2004, 9:40 PM
Is that the literal translation, or did it just happen to rhyme in English as well? *10*
Dovina on Bach by Rodavlas 10 Jul 2004, 7:23 PM
Line 2 doesn't seem to jive with line 1, unless it's a gut feeling about Bach's music. Line 5: no one. Bach's music is quite mathematical in how it sounds, and doesn't usually call up a "tender face" or "serenity and grace."
Shuushin on Bach by Rodavlas 10 Jul 2004, 7:19 PM
The rhymes aint too bad at all; unforced, and I was liking the sonnet-like structure - until the last line. that has to go, really does.
Rodavlas on Friends Forever? by nicole081083 10 Jul 2004, 6:44 PM
quick poem.
Rodavlas on Not Being Me by pinay_miss_azn 10 Jul 2004, 6:25 PM
because feeling cold is the only way we can remember what it feels like to be warm. And HOW you are is very different than WHO you are. I would work on the WHO part and let the HOW follow. Keep it up. It sounds like you have a lot more to let out.
INTRANSIT on Ze invsible limerick by DR Limerick 10 Jul 2004, 3:57 PM
rrrrrrrrRRRRRRRIPOFF!!!!!!
richa on Tweenager, they're called now. by fevriere 10 Jul 2004, 2:24 PM
"Thus is more than you can aim unto," Is a strange thing to say for a tweenager. Must have been watching Dawson's creek I guess. I get the feeling of someone moving into young adulthood. There is apprehension in 'make a wanton of me' (I am guessing you use wanton in its precise sense of unchaste). The relationship between the tweenager and the narrator is unclear. The same person, a younger sister maybe. There is an elegance in the poem, a clear progression and a certain feeling of reflection. Very good.
Dovina on Innocence Having Been Lost by dougsoderstrom 10 Jul 2004, 2:22 PM
I usually yawn at this sort of political rant. But it's not a bad rendition of a familiar chant
richa on Innocence Having Been Lost by dougsoderstrom 10 Jul 2004, 2:08 PM
So you have a problem with islamic terrorists and christians dropping cluster bombs and people dying and that members of the army do what they are told. Big whoop.
horus8 replying on There's Always Sunday by Shardik 10 Jul 2004, 1:25 PM
Wow, good luck.
some deleted user on The Ladies and the Bum by Dovina 10 Jul 2004, 12:08 PM
INSIPID A superb title.
some deleted user on Somber Like My Pain by TwilightDawned 10 Jul 2004, 12:07 PM
INSIPID A walloping pile.