SupremeDreamer
replying on Skuld Resurrected by SupremeDreamer
23 Jun 2004, 10:55 PM
I can understand that.. "it" indicates an inanimate object or thing instead of something living.. I'll certainly keep that in mind.
Happy to entertain. That's why I go on stage.
Why would she feel hate? She is content alone. He has problems, but the last line doesn't seem to work for her.
Now that I've calmed down from my little catfight with god'swife (and by the way I appreciate your comments there) I'll say something about your poem. I like the feel of it. That's not astute, but it's the kinda thing that gets you through the night. Cheers.
Hey, Zodiac, did you consider that Danâs comment could be taken several ways, as my poem hopefully can. He might have really meant that I would like to see it appear in "Seventh Day Adventist's Monthly" or some similar publication. He could have meant that for it to so appear would be ludicrous. When he says, âPerfect for . . . â heâs probably being facetious, meaning that it is far less than perfect for such a publication because the poem contains hints that such unbreakable faith is not attainable except in self-deception. I think he just might be able to interpret his way out of a week-old cod-bonnet.
I do believe the Poemranker youth element is attempting to rise up against you.
I don't think you've upset anyone (and if they're upset about something like this they're too stupid to worry about having upset them). I, myself, am not the least bit upset. Everybody's searching for something and if that's what you're searching for then thats cool.
I'm guessing that you're talking about god'swife's comment, though. I don't think it was really the subjsct matter that upset her as much as the comment by Macfan. See, many people on here are of the mindset that you should not encourage those that should not continue to embarrass themselves by posting to this or any other poetry site. I include myself in that mindset (although I'm probably one of the ones who should stop embarrasing themselves). I just choose to not be as harsh as some other people.
and hey, mediocre's good enough for me. ;0)
good one.
Artfully done, but a tad long for a first exposure. I would need to be a fan to commit to such a lengthy verse, and as it is, I admit to skimming toward the end there.
I hope the others are more accessible - but this one; very nice anyway.
(a few typos, btw - a quick spell check will reveal them)
One of your best poems.-9-
Zidiot-
I don't understand. Are you writing in "tongues?"
Still, it would be a comfort to KNOW such answers. I envy anyone able to be so comforted, truly envy them. For me, it's a riddle I feel compeled to pursue til I die, even knowing I cannot solve it. I wish no harm or disbelief to people of faith, and hope not to disple their confidence. I like to say I'm wiser and sader, but really I'm just sader.
You retard. This poem is a soggy Christmas-sock full of errors.
First, you've gotten god'swife and me hopelessly confused. We are not the same person.
Second, neither of us said either of the things you attribute to (one of) us, you fuckwit. god'swife said "I'm going through big changes right now and a kind of rebuilding of my self knowledge". I said "I want the cool kids to like me". If you're going to mash our quotes together like some hideous cheesy prawne-log, at least use our real words. As it happens, I wouldn't be caught dead saying either "wanna" or "hang with", both of which I consider embarassingly 'pop culture'.
Third, your a fuckwit.
Fourth, as it happens, I WAS bullied at grade-school, but now I'm a 'real-world success story' after only seven years of Accredited Poetry School. Last Harvest Festival, the townfolk voted me King Cornhusk.
Fifthly, my definition of poetry is the correct one. Yours is not.
And Lastly, your a cock. I've never said everyone who lives in China is a Chinaman. Anyone knows Tibetians and Mongoloids also inhabit the Chinkish territories.
-10-
I don't think you've upset anyone on this site by doing whatever it is you think you've done. Certainly not Dan garcia-Black, who couldn't interpret his way out of a week-old cod-bonnet.
This poem is pretty obviously the exact opposite of "a promotional poem for God". The idea of a "riddle of creation" that it's a "comfort" to know would be foreign and absurd to any right-minded God-believer, for one thing. And any Christian, Hindoo, or Islam silly enough to think of creation as a riddle would be comforted by the thought that he knew the answer, not the riddle, anyway.
I am a medocre female who has upset everyone on Poemranker by unintentionally making them think I have written a promotional poem for God. That is one of three interpretions, make that four, and I'm looking for anyone who cah see one of the others, better yet, someone who can see the ambiguity that is me, that is this poem, that has lived here before, that is not a bigot. Yes, I am hot now, but not, probably as you want. I drive men away like this.
Depends on if you're female and how hot you are. ;0)
Not even if I come to Tennessee, listen to your music, and not insist on a hyphenated name?
How 'bout "skuldouggery".
I prefer hyphenation so you may want to court elsewhere. I Dov- in- a- pond, and none of them knew me.
Get the hose Marge, them pasty Scotsmen done got in the trash again.