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Lifeboatman replying on To Orange by Lifeboatman 7 Jun 2004, 10:12 PM
thanks...
Brain Fart?
That works. Could have said that in the first place. Why didn't you?
sliver on USS Pride by DR Limerick 7 Jun 2004, 9:42 PM
I saw it. Hell of an anchor. Is that like sea rage or something?
sliver replying on A life unsure by sliver 7 Jun 2004, 9:38 PM
Does a slight edit help you reconsider?
My path has been laid out only insofar as the destination I hope to achieve
sliver on Isn't it a wonder by caitydee 7 Jun 2004, 9:31 PM
As do I.
See Waiting for the worm, By yours truly. You might like it.
I quote: "but the path has been laid out for me, I need only the courage to walk it." That does imply a predestined direction, or maybe I'm mentally warped. I believe its both. But yeah, it doesn't really matter in the end.
Believe me, the path I traverse is not paved, by any stretch of the imagination. And it changes daily. I don't know what made you think I am following a predestined direction.
SupremeDreamer replying on Le Sommeil- Slumber by Sasha 7 Jun 2004, 9:26 PM
You should post a longer version. ;/
SupremeDreamer on A life unsure by sliver 7 Jun 2004, 9:23 PM
Well, that earns a nine in my book. Nothings better than a nice good edit.
-shrug- Don't remember your tequila worm piece.
I never mentioned giving into one basest desires, but I did mention facing ones darker psyche. As for desire, everyone gives into their desires atleast once if not many times- any who say they never have? are frankly lying. What I've come to know, for myself, is that: No path is a road to freedom until you have paved it yourself. So wonderful goodies for you, your followin down the lil yellow brick road. Theres not much courage in following a direction, having to choose and walk without yellow bricks for comfort is brave, and independent- I prefer that over anything else.
sliver replying on Decks of Cards (So Long to the City) by wilco 7 Jun 2004, 9:13 PM
Just getting an opinion. Good lookin'out man.
sliver replying on Writers' Block by wilco 7 Jun 2004, 9:10 PM
Si
wilco replying on Decks of Cards (So Long to the City) by wilco 7 Jun 2004, 9:04 PM
...and actually, the best current country band in America is the Jayhawks.
That would be mine. And what was wrong with my worm?
sliver replying on A life unsure by sliver 7 Jun 2004, 8:41 PM
Thanks, I felt a change was in order.
We don't acquire our distincion of morality by descent, but rather, by rising above our nature. And you know that giving in to your basest desires and needs is not the way we aspire to perfection. I have found that striving to achieve pure charity is the most fulfilling thing I have ever done in my life. Like you, I don't claim to know it all, but the path has been laid out for me, I need only the courage to walk it.