ook for me this tells a story.. i wrote it for a person.. from me... so its not "angst" to me.. I don't really know what you are getting at.. Saying that you have just watched a movie that made you cry, and it was very touching.. then its not important? you said It shouldn't be something important.. All of my poems feel big to me... they are important.. and I'm not trying to make it seem like "silly angst"...

1) "see you aint got a clue because you think in balck [sic] and white" means nothing to me. I happen to think the basis of all "clues" is perceiving things as clearly as possible. Who wouldn't? Oh. You. Well, if you want to argue some anti-intellectual nonsense, by all means go ahead, but I should point out to you that you're the one who already looks half-gay and incapable of spelling such a simple word as black. 2) "you think too much because you dont trust your own judgement" - ibid. And does that even begin to make sense? No. How the hell else would I arrive at judgments other than by thinking them? Wait - maybe if I just took the judgments of others, such as Jesuses or fictional shaolin monks? But no, that would be the height of not trusting my own judgment. 3) To say "I don't know anything at all and neither does anyone else" is bosh to the max. Of course I know simple things, such as my address and how to tie my shoes (at least, by the third attempt.) One of the things I know with a reasonable degree of certainty is what a crap poem looks like, having written literally hundreds of them myself and read thousands on poemranker (while you, let's be clear, haven't read any.) 5) Stop worrying about whether you can "keep coming back and laughing at me," and start confabulating some way to make a lick of sense and not look like some kind of, I don't know, irrationally laughing guy. 6) Great.

RULE #4: Please make an effort to spell/grammatize correctly. Quaint as it seems, I find language to be the only thing that makes everything mean anything. If you're going to continue to write in misspelled pidgen gobbledygook, I'll get huffy and go home.

A Prequel! Good Gravy. Was that a project for Dork 101? Just kidding, you're probably completely adorable. Find something exciting to do, you're young, have some sex or something, it's good for you.

You are roughly the fifth person on this site to claim to have me "running in circles," "up against a wall," "bent over with my pants down," or some other such groundless boast. The first four are currently wailing and gnashing their teeth in my own specially-constructed "outer darkness," by which I mean poetry dot com. So, sure I'd like to play, but you have to first learn the rules. RULE #1: Always format your comments in numbered lists. Otherwise we won't know who's winning. RULE #2: If, say, I make a point, your comment should answer that point in the precisest possible terms. None of this galloping off wildly with your breeches half-breeched. For both our conveniences' sake, the points shall take the form of numbered lists. COROLLARY #1 TO RULE #2: This means when I suggest you take a look at the poems and other whatnot posted by the people you're making flolloping assumptions about, you might seriously consider doing so. Failure to respond to existing points or to introduce new points in a reasonable manner will result in the addition of one GAY POINT to your GAYNESS QUOTIENT for each infraction. RULE #3: You're a cod. That is all.

Please don't listen to him, cuddlytiger. I'm shaped exactly like crystal lane swift but with wider hipbones.

Um.

re: "oh, and things can be 'dulled' without be 'non-sharp'" Are you a robot programmed to approximate human speech? Congratulations, you're doing swell.

see you aint got a clue because you think in balck and white, and you think too much because you dont trust your own judgement.... and if you do trust it.... fuck me you shouldnt if your response is anything to go by, the one thing with me is... i got the brains and self honesty to understand that i do not know anything at all and neither does anyone else, they just think they do...whereas you and your ego think you know so much..whereas you know nothing also but are to pathetic and afraid to admit it to yourself....keep it coming.... because as long as you do... i'll keep coming back and laughing at you... i got a can of worms and i like fishing

oops what a petty my covers blown?

rofl i really got you running the circles aint i zodiac? i like games wanna play some more?

He is a monster....just a cuddly one.