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Shardik on Pills by erickvisions 19 May 2004, 11:38 PM
A carefully wadded clump of shite.
Shardik on A Civil Saving Strain by Enkidu 19 May 2004, 11:38 PM
Guns
Shardik on Hmm... by tre 19 May 2004, 11:36 PM
Scud
Sasha on Hmm... by tre 19 May 2004, 9:10 PM
No
zodiac replying on Unwed by gilded in gold 19 May 2004, 9:03 PM
Since you've got a roadmap, how about unmarked or unplotted? It would probably help if this poem made a bit of sense.
wilco replying on Unwed by gilded in gold 19 May 2004, 8:54 PM
then you could rhyme it with Philadelphonic.
Sasha replying on Jesus, I funneled enough beer to marry that? by Bachus 19 May 2004, 8:52 PM
Have fun with that then. Send me a postcard- preferably one without corpses if you can find one.
Sasha replying on Unwed by gilded in gold 19 May 2004, 8:50 PM
how about being Classical and saying appoikilothronic
zodiac replying on Jesus, I funneled enough beer to marry that? by Bachus 19 May 2004, 8:47 PM
Yes. I mean, we moved to NC. I've lived here roughly since Lollapalooza was cool and, yes, it is as toothless and ign'r'nt as you've heard. I seriously haven't worn shoes for the last two days. Incidentally, I just found out my wife and I are moving to Jordan in July. I hear the place is buggy with Islams.
wilco replying on Unwed by gilded in gold 19 May 2004, 8:41 PM
ungarnished? I don't know. I think unpainted is fine.
zodiac replying on Unwed by gilded in gold 19 May 2004, 8:40 PM
Your username means "covered in gold in gold."
gilded in gold replying on Unwed by gilded in gold 19 May 2004, 8:39 PM
so what would be better than 'unpainted' ? help
wilco on Unwed by gilded in gold 19 May 2004, 8:33 PM
unpainted moments, eh.....ok...I'll bite -9-
gilded in gold replying on Unwed by gilded in gold 19 May 2004, 8:30 PM
ha.. whatever. no sweat.
Sasha replying on Unwed by gilded in gold 19 May 2004, 8:30 PM
As an apology I gave the mouse tracker another whirl. -9-
Sasha replying on Unwed by gilded in gold 19 May 2004, 8:28 PM
Well shit. This is what happens when your contacts go missing
gilded in gold replying on Unwed by gilded in gold 19 May 2004, 8:27 PM
slow down sasha.. you go too fast. umm... if you had read it, the title actually is -- Unwed & my username is --- gilded in gold... meh.
Sasha on Unwed by gilded in gold 19 May 2004, 8:24 PM
This title means: "Covered in gold, in gold" I'm sure any monkey with some caffein and refrigerator letter-magnets could do better. Here's a 6 so you don't hurt yourself
Sasha replying on Jesus, I funneled enough beer to marry that? by Bachus 19 May 2004, 8:13 PM
But you moved to north carolina. Or was that just your IP.
Sasha on Sonnet Eighteen by devilishnutcase 19 May 2004, 7:40 PM
I could compare you to a summer’s day, But see, you are far hotter and too sweet, And summer is quite transient; will not stay And after parting, leaves no one in heat. Sometimes the pleasures in a summer’s glow Leave one too lonely in their warmth too numb, Without another heart that one can know And in the night it fades to gloom and glum. But see, your warmth and beauty shine a ray That but grows sweeter in the thrill of night, And leaves one yet in heat when you’re away, And ever so your glory will bloom bright. For you will shine, eternal as a star, When these lines are forgotten as most are.