Don-Quixote
replying on Rockmage, I was going to pay him... by <{Baba^Yaga}>
15 Nov 2003, 12:13 AM
did you take part in their vodka tradition?
Suggestion is easy, just flush all the words after the comma.
"just silent observers;
a witness [of] moments repeated"
Cordless laser mousies are better- you can keep clicking in the bathroom- when you go in the kitchen to get lunch- when your watching tv...... and on and on.
Tails are only good to step on. :)
A nice conceptual run! and your first 'haiku'; good job. Too bad we don't have another classification for 5/7/5 poems.
try these as cinquain (2/4/6/8/2)
-7-
Memoirs of a Monk - Saint Screamer is listed under SD if you want to cruise the first one.
well.. half sentences.. fuck, sometimes i got so much to say, that punctuation becomes an itch.
suggestion? because i hate toying with punctuation when im already slightly handicapped in that department.
I said that this morning after you had already buried me in zeros you fucking wank. That's what I'm saying. Look at the comment's time and look at the time you gave me all of the zeros. What? Are you on medication?
Hey - this is really pretty good. I'm thinking the rhyming might take away from the seriousness of it, but as it is - it works.
How about another version without rhyme? But keep this one too. -8-
They molest mouse clickers until they dont work anymore?
You got some asian child-labor army too? Do they call themselves the flamin zero deathsquad? and whirl the mousies while crying out "ZEROED BIZNATCH!?!??!??!?"
lmao man, think about it, look at what your saying- its punchline hour, really, I could write a free-verse skit with this shit, and get a spot on HBO with chris rock
"whiteboy slampoet will be tonights musical guest"
(grandmaster flash will be playing the drunken banjo)
"liquescent" - nice, also: "non compos mentis eye"
I like this - I would like it more without the half sentence after the last comma. -8-
crusaders never need cash- do they?
Just a mouse, right?
<{Baba^Yaga}>
replying on Rockmage, I was going to pay him... by <{Baba^Yaga}>
14 Nov 2003, 11:34 PM
Fuck you old man. I don't have to threaten you. With your kind of attitude and sensibilty in life? You'll be your own rapid demise with no help from me, and that's a prediction. I predict it will be accidental, and horribly painful. And you didn't hurt my feelings cramps, because, I don't have any. I'm a better writer than you by a long shot. So that would be like me being upset at my four year old son for being a little boy. You just have no manners, that's all, and you're unsophisticated, but if that keeps your gums a gumming, gum away by all means. But it don't bug me, I'm just as bored as the next guy. Just more talented and better looking than you. Smile there swoll nuts! You'll bust a nut soon, that and prostate cancer will be your gift from me.
Oki- lets play the seesaw!
10!
<{Baba^Yaga}>
replying on Rockmage, I was going to pay him... by <{Baba^Yaga}>
14 Nov 2003, 11:23 PM
We'll see.
3500? Damn it, I would have taken that instead of giving 900 zeros anyday, specially since I could never become motivated to zerobomb someone.
attention? dood, see his comment on my crappy haiku post- he's on some sort of holy mission me thinks.
Some folks take the internet way too seriously, or need to be on a best list.. -shrug- (my only wish is to get a score over 6 one day.. if im so lucky.)
well, 900 crap votes aside, shall we toast my fiasco record farewell? Because mr. rock topped it with a super-rocket, and left me choking on the exhaust.
<{Baba^Yaga}>
replying on Rockmage, I was going to pay him... by <{Baba^Yaga}>
14 Nov 2003, 11:22 PM
Dude, you're stupid, drunk, and the only one worth laughing at here.
<{Baba^Yaga}>
replying on Rockmage, I was going to pay him... by <{Baba^Yaga}>
14 Nov 2003, 11:21 PM
A what started? A war? Why because your shit poetry was taken off of the best list. Max, don't you think you getting a few poems taken off of the best list because indeed they weren't the best is hardly a reason to give me 900 zero's. For christ sake, you're totally out of line, and just being utterly foolish now.
<{Baba^Yaga}>
replying on Rockmage, I was going to pay him... by <{Baba^Yaga}>
14 Nov 2003, 11:13 PM
Yeah, now it has something in common with that inflated condom you wear on your neck you call a penis magnet.
<{Baba^Yaga}>
replying on Rockmage, I was going to pay him... by <{Baba^Yaga}>
14 Nov 2003, 11:10 PM
Shut up slut.
<{Baba^Yaga}>
replying on Rockmage, I was going to pay him... by <{Baba^Yaga}>
14 Nov 2003, 11:10 PM
Yeah, because you're putting shitty poems on the best list, and mostly yours, which is shitty and tastless. You sir, are hardly a gentlemen, and still, this was all after you gave me 900 zero's. I said 'that' after the fact that you'd already reuined my poetry with 900 zeros for no reason, but the rain, and your knee? Max, you're an idiot, truly.
this i fucking great, here is a 10 without the zero:o)