OnTheOtherHand
on The first Poeme by Everyone by Everyone
17 Oct 2003, 2:43 AM
Gayness
The 'Ren' is the magic of something having a name therefore being remembered forever.
Found. However, since you have so many, which one rings true? Is it yours you are referring to?
Pardon. I can't seem to find this Ren you speak of. Would you be so kind as to elaborate. Thank you.
thank you very much. here's a hint... there's a miniature city inside her bedroom as she sleeps, and when she breathes me in she remembers me the next day... and more stuff.
I'll grant that it's probably clever - though it may sound more so than is so; I do, however, appreciate the unusual form.
The other two: sapphires; this - more muddy. I will admit, it can be fun to play in the mud.
Writ with a confident, skilled hand that pulls words as concepts onto stacks with a geometric efficiency.
Once again, I have to work to understand what shape this equation takes - but I want to.
This is quite nice; flowing, roaming within an easy pattern.
Having said that, I'm gonna haveta read it a few more times to figure out what the hell it's about - but, you know what? - I look forward to it.
Call me Richard, the third. You fucking turd.
No, like in tupperware.
And I thought you were a stunningly good judge of character - maybe we were both right.
(besides, I was trying to be polite - dick. Don't say anything to big daddy - he scares me)
Maybe learn how to express an opinion worth expressing? Like how to make toast without face raping your children and pets.
It's Egyptian not nickolodean.
Having emerged from your mother's anus feet first? I can see why you dislike me and gay people.
I love the first line.
wow. this is amazing!
wow, I love this poem.
my heart is a pasted paper scrap on my glossy chest
--is a great line
litter the streets of an abandoned bedroom city.
--is the best line
-10-
you are obviously a fuck hole.
oh joy, the public opinion. What would we do without it?
And a self deletist one at that.