INTRANSIT
on An Ode to the cat fish head helmet on your penis by horus8
15 Oct 2003, 6:31 AM
Feeling quite "mild" right then?
I was at Royal Grammar School, Amersham, High Wycombe, Bucks.
Where did you go to school?
Ambiguity is the face mischief
oh, not this old argument again. My seasoned and well learned response has evolved to:
fine.
Are you Matthew Bennett or James Wright?
The definition of a sonnet is a poem which says "Sonnet" at the top.
I have seen these bastards in the cinema and felt like sliting there throats with the stale popcorn they sell. On my last visit to the Odeon I heard someone groaning and told them to shut the fuck up, on my exit i realized the person i shouted at was in a wheelchair - still fair treatment to all lol.
Interesting.
micah isaiah handrinos (my son spelled his name)
I fear singing lessons would only make me sound as if I spend a lot of time worrying about the way I sound? And of course now I'll be losing sleep over your interpretation of my interpretation, although, I notice you don't have one. Which goes to say, I at least, do.
Lord Chutney for one.
I do not know this shoeshiner person, but I find myself in the odd position of agreeing (several times recently). Strange.
Well Bachus... You're finally a head of your penis. lol. I've surpassed Blade to regain ownership of our pud.
I'm liking the title, and many of the individual lines. As for the thing-in-itself, I will nod knowingly, and select six from the dropdown menu at right.
"I see dead poems"
what did they whisper, what did they whisper??
Quite a nice first stanza there.
Perhaps I'm a bit jaded, but some of the rhymes in the remaining stanza brought me pause.
I'm thinking you could consolidate the second and third to arrive at something that compares with the first.
it is amazing how many meanings "render" has.
I've seen you do alot with alot, and now - alot with a few. cool.
This should have a few stanza buddies, I think.
this is about a rose, right?
"droprain" is a cool word. actually there is an interesting slant to the language here (and a few spelling errors).
I'm guessing you could convey the same meaning and emotion in about a sixth the words.
awesome title. Toss a questionmark into the text and call it done.
I like.
no. I'm not.