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tadpole on I'm Aboard by Ali_cat018 2 Oct 2003, 12:37 PM
I like the train metaphor, I would suggest working some more train related words in there and maybe working with the flow a little
Bachus on a rapid expenditure by skaskowski 2 Oct 2003, 12:02 PM
Surely.
Bachus on Desire by revy13 2 Oct 2003, 12:00 PM
The last time I smelled a Temptation? he spun around splashing lukewarm jerry curl juice upon my naked buttocks. Naturally, I instantly climaxed in a heap of off Navy blue jelly and fuzzy toenail clipping pearljam to suck my thumb and coo. LIKE A REAL MAN in an unreal world full of hate and 7 elevens. I'm so sad so so damn sad *sniffle*.
With a John Deer attachment for mowing down best buds? Yaaaaaawn. Oh not another drive by?! You should add a note that reads; "I want you all to know that I thought long and hard about what I was going to say in this poem and not having any real ability to communicate without my penis in my hand, I had to think up some over played excuse of sentiment in the hopes that someone might like my po-ems." while holding your little wee wee so you don't wet yourself from the excitement of it all.
revy13 replying on Battered moon by revy13 2 Oct 2003, 11:48 AM
obviously you have more time on your hands to wonder what the title of poem means. I appreciate the comments, like I said I am nothing without an audience, whether its good or bad. So if you are all about the "festering wound", you might want to get that checked out.
Bachus on time's concubine by skaskowski 2 Oct 2003, 11:48 AM
So-So. I've seen better from you.
J.B. Manning replying on The Fucktory by horus8 2 Oct 2003, 11:42 AM
what's with the multiple user names? - Yes I see fear distributed on a regular basis. In media. If you have pimples, you wont get laid, you're a loser if you aren't a high bad jock with a big dick, there's nothing but angry gun slinging black men in the news, be afraid, we're about to be attacked by third world terrorists with unlimited supplies of nuclear nothings, BE AFRAID so George Bush can protect you, BE AFRAID so you can buy something to protect yourself. BUY BUY BUY to quence your FEAR...afraid of not being kewl? Well, just buy a nice new car and you'll feel better? Afraid someone will steal your car? Well, just buy an alarm, a gun, and a dog to protect yourself? Not afraid enough, not protected enough? Just watch the news...
mrpresident replying on A London Cafe by mrpresident 2 Oct 2003, 11:13 AM
What does that mean? Out of interest....
Bachus replying on The Fucktory by horus8 2 Oct 2003, 11:11 AM
Woah, you've seen fear distrubuted? excellent, what a rare and majestic occurence for you to have witnessed. It what form was it packaged and passed out? Can, foam with saran wrap, or digitally remastered.
Bachus replying on The Fucktory by horus8 2 Oct 2003, 11:07 AM
Outstanding! Except, I'm not the guy in the story. It's a fictional piece about a nonfictional reality. See how that works? Because, what you don't know is that I actually am a black jewish dwarf lesbian with a prostetic face. Therefore, it would be impractical and foolish to say I was a bigot, a racist or, a gay poet, or even a Toyota Camry.
mrpresident replying on The Geek by mrpresident 2 Oct 2003, 11:02 AM
Thanks for your comment, what are the titles of yours?
Bachus replying on Joshua by Bachus 2 Oct 2003, 11:00 AM
I personally agree with you. Except for the part with the old big screen tv 'action' there are wonderfull fantastic images happening there. It's just that you're English and not 'getting' it. See, in America, they do this weird thing late at night when every one's sleeping. They hype up our GREAT NATION with various tributes and handsaluting and gun salutes and flags and children and TORCHES that torch permanently. And trust me when I say it's fantastical to the MAX! the rest, be assured, you are absolutely accurate about.
mrpresident on I Love You by babyBOOMER 2 Oct 2003, 10:53 AM
Wow, that has fantastic imagery!
J.B. Manning on The Fucktory by horus8 2 Oct 2003, 10:52 AM
very creative and clear. Though I'm always against racism and biggotry, I admit appreciating your honesty for fear of "jews and negroids." As is common practice where fear is so freely distributed.
horus8 on Battered moon by revy13 2 Oct 2003, 10:49 AM
hmmm. how does one actually figure out whether or not the moon has been battered? Doust it cry. Doust it shimmy? Perhaps... it sends you an e-mail saying "help me I'm a battered in the pants of some highschooler on a bus staring at you right now with a brown eye!"?. That's it battered moons don't have black I's they have brown I's. lol. between me and you? your title is fucking seriously pathetic on a huge scale. An avalanche, if you will, of retardation. Kitsch to the max!
NewbieMe replying on Para Sa Aking Sinta by NewbieMe 2 Oct 2003, 10:48 AM
I would have been offended If I didn't know that you are such a plagiarist you twat! So I'm just saying... your words mean nothing to me and I'm guessing to others as well. Capisce?
razorgrin on Afraid by Brittanyy 2 Oct 2003, 9:03 AM
Ooh! Useless ellipses and whining self-pity! Darling, you could have a great career writing poemes for uses as emetics. Don't waste your talent on us.
horus8 on Livin' With No Momma by DurtKL 2 Oct 2003, 8:08 AM
I would if Dark Angel wasn't borrowing both sets of my teeth currently.
horus8 on The Geek by mrpresident 2 Oct 2003, 8:04 AM
Amen.
Skill.