J.B. Manning
replying on The Fucktory by horus8
2 Oct 2003, 5:00 PM
HAHA, MM is my HERO! We're from the same town. I'm going to meet him on the 18th!
There is nothing worse than imagination without taste.
I like the last line best.
short and sweet
I like both yours and nentwined's Haiku here.
Why are you commenting on Horus8s poem as if it were your own? Are you using multiple user names? Why is that?
Talent without purpose or focus is such a sad thing to witness.
You must be bored.
565
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566. funny how quickly one can read 'zero' when not paying attention.
la.
I don't like the way you use the title, but... no, I don't like it. That is all.
self-rewarding tens
do not attract green brethren
You are a zero.
HAHA
My favourite part is when you say Collages. urp.
You'll have to excuse my lack of current sophistication. I'm drunk, already.
Horus8, is half demon and likes singing and Metaphysics and is highly intelligent. Elitist, radical. Leader and quite an adept practicer of the forbiden arts.
Bachus,is an ass, loves playing various instruments and drinking, whoring, and pretty much what his name entails.
<{Baba^Yaga{>, is more of the botanist bitch in me, my androgenus side, and she is heartless and quite cruel, nost of the time.
Shardik, loves nature and fighting and guy shit and being alone. Reading a lot and soul searching, painting, sculpting.
Jeremi B. Handrinos, is me when the others aren't hogging up all of the good shit, I'm a dad an actor ah more social and an all around Leo (egoless though which is rare) giving protector of the light.
I like the message in this poem. I think you could work the lyric into something more fluid, but I like the core of it.
I agree with Tad. What is it called when you use one thing to discribe another? Like a poem that speaks of hot rods, but it's really refering to something sexual?
Revy, you'll quickly find that there are far too many elderly tards on this site with many a pompous point of worthless view. With an aptitude for virtual bullying where they otherwise fail in the real world. Don't mind them; they are but pimples on a limp dick.
I like this a lot.
lovely. ;-)
liked the "bull moo." Maybe use another word instead of "cracked" twice