SupremeDreamer
replying on A Reporters Saturday Headline Review by Don-Quixote
4 Aug 2003, 4:15 AM
oh fucking great.. now i have to buy more books.. cmon, im not made of money, i do admit his topics do strike a chord in me, but i need a free source for his writings...
perhaps you would like to point me to a url of that essay.. or should i do my hacker majic and delve right into it..?
And, about one of my parents having a divinity complex.. i dont agree there.. and i wonder where you got this idea.. but im sure you will atleast clue me in on this sooner or later, or ill comprehend perhaps when i find this essay.
the poet stanza, i agree it doesnt fit, but the ghost stanza.. cmon, thats a fucking masterpiece, and works beatifully in it.
And about potentially fucking it up, i dont fuck things up, trial and error just makes me succeed, its just a matter of time, and i dont take long to jump to the next level..
now, really, i want to know why you think the ghost stanza doesnt work.. id love to hear this, because we are basically energy, everything is a form of energy.. and we are children, some of us teenagers, and very few are old wise teachers.
And looking at history, 90% of humanity is still in kindergarten.. a long torturouse path of evolution that makes me think most of us are autistic or simply crazed retards.
do you disagree?
Hmmm.. A bit long, the ending was great, try it this way. Lose the ghost stanza, and I think the poet stanza doesn't really fit. Other that I see potential. Both to make something very artistic and to fuck it up. Have fun.
Very good, now you're thinking. You will find that Manly P. Hall wrote an essay on the subject you might find very interesting. Then we may delve all that you wish. But my friend, rest in knowing you do have one, along with one of your parents, as do I.
horus8
replying on Upon a falling bar stool (Free for all) by PluckyHoe by horus8
3 Aug 2003, 11:51 PM
The garbage that you make your basketballs & paper airplanes fly into your office depot delux waste basket/paper shredder is of little to no interest to me.
poetandknowit
replying on Upon a falling bar stool (Free for all) by PluckyHoe by horus8
3 Aug 2003, 9:59 PM
You always did write more poetry than I did. I jot down what I can when I can and hope to find time to work it into something worthwhile. I am not (nor have ever been) a prolific poet. I am just a good one.
horus8
replying on Upon a falling bar stool (Free for all) by PluckyHoe by horus8
3 Aug 2003, 9:46 PM
All in the past dear sir. But your well spoken tokens of praise and kind words are very much appreciated and noted.
And like I told our president last month (in case I win father of the year, and must see him again) "Mr. Bush, I might be the one on my knees now, but in the end we'll see who gets bent over, sir." Ornella, was tossed off the train long ago, and I, as you can see am a full fledged poet, and easilly, quite easilly may I add, replaced you and your rein at poemranker from a year back <Yawn> I write more poetry than you do now pk that's just evolution. Some have it in spades, others just talk about it. By the way I've enjoyed the things you have been talking of as of late very 'interesting' poetry, I would have thought you might have improved and came back a peer, so that we might spar, but as always you drag in the innocent children, knowing you no longer have, nor did for that matter, have the tongue to lash me properly with. I hoped we might be lovers again, but I cannot part with my poetry against someone so unpoetic and partial to melodrama.
poetandknowit
replying on Upon a falling bar stool (Free for all) by PluckyHoe by horus8
3 Aug 2003, 9:28 PM
I am not upset. I truly mean it when I say Mr. JBH/JHB is father of the year material. I sent in his nomination to President Bush's "I-love-my-big-daddy" campaign just yesterday. He is a kind and loving citizen and parent, and teaches he wee lad that hard work and incessant cigarette smoking will get you through just about any situation in Hollywood (the toughest town in show business). I am proud of his success, and I, for one, wish to declare this Jeremy Britt day. How about you Thom? Where is your spirit for your fellow man. You are a war hero. Mr. Hours8 battles everyday just to pay the bills. He sucks a bit of dick to make sure the rent is paid on time (high California rents, you know), he constantly battle the temptations of Ornella Muti and her Bulgarian sway. He is a true everyday warrior. And I love him!
Now look at what ya done! Damnit all, ya upset the whole apple cart! I think ya better leave be4 more people get pist off
holy fuck.. LEAVE POEM RANKER.. this is the worste pile of shit ive ever seen. fucking christ.. torture!!! stop it before i fucking chop you into a caesar salad. 0
Ah, yesss, pisss of mind.
Rosalina Damron
NADA
Shardik
replying on Upon a falling bar stool (Free for all) by PluckyHoe by horus8
3 Aug 2003, 8:33 PM
Oh that's right because you say... Ah, I see how this game works. lol
Shardik
replying on Upon a falling bar stool (Free for all) by PluckyHoe by horus8
3 Aug 2003, 8:30 PM
Oh dear, sir you are too flattering, but one movie venture in that area for a friend of mine does not justify budding in the least, but I do thank your noting of my various events. I am however very excited about my son's acceptance into a very good school due to my dilligence and at home teaching these last two years, hey now. Why not mention my other three films that have nothing to do with my softer snugglier porn flick which did quite well on Hbo if my memory serves me right, millions.
Shardik
replying on Upon a falling bar stool (Free for all) by PluckyHoe by horus8
3 Aug 2003, 8:22 PM
Why wouldn't I be?
Shardik
replying on Upon a falling bar stool (Free for all) by PluckyHoe by horus8
3 Aug 2003, 8:22 PM
Title for what? A piece on your legs or your dick? LOL. You can't beat me Thom I'm quicker and smarter.
then again.. i got nothing better to do.. how would you like me to help? i made the plums, but we got to make him eat them..