-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on Sex on bugs by LuckyJoe
4 Aug 2003, 9:23 AM
Of course you WOULD have a bad itch about the OVERuse of profanity. Because someone who overuses profanity uses precisely that quantity of profanity which is excessive. But let me ask you this: If someone told you to jump off a cliff, would you do it? Exactly my point. We aren't here to follow orders. We're here to entertain, and to educate. Because education is the key, and without it how can anyone, let alone someone who overuses profanity, look a child in the eye and say, truthfully, and without prejudice, "You'll be a man, my son"?
Not so much the use of profanity but over use. I have a bad itch about over use of profanity. Mainly because over using profanity takes away anything intellegent contained in the sentance. Had he said "That fucking sucked." Wouldn't have been any big deal... but every other word was a cuss word... hard to take anyone serious with a vocab like that. Even if they're mad and yelling at you wanting to kick your ass. All I can seem to do is laugh when people talk like that.
Does his "use of profanity" really upset you? Please tell me exactly how it makes you feel. Thanks.
sorry dq, this leaves me flat. maybe i'm in a mood this morning, but it's coming across as imitative and banal. the bar just got heavier.
luckyjoe-
this is poorly written, and entertaining in a pre-teen, wow SEX! kind of way. you give everything away; you give nothing away, and you do it without skill. i suspect you plan on beoming a teacher, since you gave us a list of reading-comprhension questions at the end.
insteadof being impressed by your misguided sense of your own cleverness, may i humbly suggest you study the english language?
that is all.
I'm having a tantrum because I made a mistake.
have i been particularly pestilential towards you of late? i had not noticed. i guess maybe i should sit a few rows back on the bus. maybe that would help? or maybe not buy exactly the same groceries as you? nor wear my hair like that?
no, sorry, i could not go on if i left you alone. the restraining order was on pink paper this time. its flaccid hue makes a lovely bright spot in my collection.
leave me alone
The Victor's Trophy (guillotine memoir) by -=Dark_Angel=-
Hoist above my trembling groin
I wait for circumcision
Trousers down I shout "Purloin!"
And pray for close precision.
gRoin.
I got hit on the mask playing paintball once, I stumbled around, into a tree nearly knocking me out, and into the enemies base. My god that was a painful weekend, and as a frequent visitor to dominatris I know real pain. Hmmm, cheese grater on the cock.
lol
stunning, visionary and prophetic (I dearly hope). Actually, I heard DA doesn't have a dick. Lost it to a Russian prospector in a grizzly Haiku tournament in Mongolia.
Well, since foot and mouth, his wife has left him for the vet who put down all his sheep! He's gotta console himself somehow...
Thanks for the vote and the comment. The comment was that of humor and thats what the poem was supposed to be. Just something totally off the wall compared to my norm :)
Nice comment thanks for the humor :)
Have a good day.
You may have thought that it was total shit... hey what ever flips your skirt. But one, refrain from using profanity please. I've not sworn at you; so you have no reason to swear at me. Two treat others as you wish to be treated (if you wrote something that was total shit I would reply saying to try something different because what you just needed some help). Three I'm going to laugh at you and your remark both now. Remarks from people like you are worth about as much as a toilet bowl filled with feces... lots of crap.
Just because one poem wrote by a person doesn't quit your tastes and or likings doesn't mean everything they write is going to be the same. But I understand you have a fetish of sounding all big and bad while stroking your joke behind your computer screen. Rock on, what ever gets you off. More power to the pimples that act up like yourself needing popped. Nothing is more tasteless than that of puss filled membranes.
Thanks for your comment... have a nice day may your fetish filled strokes give you great pleasure at the expense of others.
I like it, provocative images of playing God. Creation vs destruction. As a Marine don't you get the piss ripped out of you for being a poet?
Line 2: its => it's
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You make paintball seem so beautiful. I feel a lump in my throat.