poetandknowit
on When Jesus Found Me by http://mulberryfairy
31 Jul 2003, 2:51 PM
complemented not complimented?
haha this is great
yeah, i guess you did piss him off. somebody's got to be our posterchild, right?
Absolutely
Versa good sir, thank you.
Yes, "Correct", I'm with you.
So... I think I pissed your friend Thom off, I'm sorry... God knows I tried so hard not to go overboard, but unfortunately, his argument had two things moving in disfavour of victory.
1) His poetry was cocca, his old stuff was wayyyy better.
2) He set me up with too sweet a shot, I had to take it.
Please forgive my. My peers, my teachers... I know I have been bad, but I couldn't help it... My shit detector was red lining.
Do you still love me Z, Pk, Gw, WORLD!!!! ohhhh sweet Jesu, I am a sinner with a cursed tongue fuzz fungal birth defect called.
THE EYE OF HORUS! I see all, I am a warm wind breaking, I am the scent of dew. Yeah, okay, well... I'm going to go smoke now thanks for hearing me out. My names Jeremi I'm a Rankaholic.
Correct. It is the truth.
sweet father of nearsighted little-leaguers!
boy aint dat da truthe.
Nice try, but rest assured I knew that going into the piece.
Narcissistic elitism with a dash of sado masochist.
I don't swallow.
Beautiful, I love it when you talk dirty. Umm, say... "Narcissistic elitism with a dash of sado masochist", please, i'm so close to spooging.
yes. better still.
Do you ever think you are the poster child for what can go wrong when you smoke pot every day?
Minds.
Do I look like the fucking classified section? Do I look like a redneck that knows anything about cars? DO I!!!!!!!!!!???????????
Would you happen to know where I might be able to find a first generation Mazda Rx-7 in need of some tlc?
Minus Paul's beard, you do no my aversion to hair, he could be considered halfway handsome to some. So there are reasons for things. And miles in between. And mountains to cross. So, Frass taught me to play guitar like that guy in Hot Tuna. He can play solos while riding on a bike with no hands. I find that most impressive about him. Don't you. I bet that Jerimi Britt Handrinos cannot do that.
Remeber, poetry is a way for people to get a good look at themselves even the blind get to see their hideous reflections. It's not for the weak of constitution mind you. So far, you're pissed off because I gave your spider poem a six and declined to vote on any of your others. Perhaps, you feel that since I'm 28, and lacking tits and ass and empathy for the overwhelming amount of congealing shit poets to the bottom of my hoof, and since I'm younger than your fat flat Harley Davidson ass, I know not how to instruct a servant to the grind about the wonders of poetry? Sir, I regret to inform you that Arthur Rimbaud was a mere seventeen year old dandy when he wrote a book that changed the planet (more inportantly he toppled off the old guard with one big swoosh). Manly P. Hall was 23. Skill is formed with dilligence and humility not hallmarkian crocodile tears my good man, and I gurantee to you that I've spent more time studying poetry than you have sleeping it off. I have earned the ability to fan tail my ass accordingly and prance around as bachanal as one can possibly become in 3 decades. It's a sacrifice, I know, the way I gloat and tweek my own nipples whilst cackeling the gay loon, but friend, know this, it's because I love you and it hurts me more than it hurts you.