Well, one thing for sure, you sure know how to cater your pieces to the best list! Next, perhaps, do one on the struggles of the neanderthal before they were exterminated, or, how about the chinese in California? Sure, then, you could occupy every single slot on the top poemranker countdown along with the rest of the poet hacks. ten movies a year come out in the jewish controled movie industry telling this same story a million times better over and over again. Yet, do they, 'the jews' take the time to explore other races struggles? No, not in the least, because they only give a fuck about themselves. Oh, hey lets do another tired movie on world war two? what about the palestinians? What about the genocides in Africa or south America, sweat shops, child labor, but no, another fucking Jewish blee on jewish blow blee blah blue. Whatever. Jews only look after themselves, and I'm fucking sick of it, I'm not saying the nazis were right or that the Jews didn't suffer, but I can name thousands of shit (currentevents) that's just as important to be aware of get lost underneath the much more important plight of the Jews (since they own the media)... But alas I'm sure you can add it to your control of the board mr pig, but personally, I thought it was poorly written, and to an average kid into poetry, it's incomprehendible anyway. I hope it goes to #1. Good day.

Thank you.

Perhaps you should rent a cherry picker and join him?

The difference between Jews and American Indians is the tribes don't fucking whine on a daily basis, and they are still piss broke and suffering. While the Jews are once again on the top, in control of everything, as always still fucking pretending like they got it bad. Perhaps you should do a piece on the Pygmies plight called "White dwarf".

Certainly

I believe He would of stayed with the Euro.

lol..

8. infinitely better than you were just a few months ago. i'd say the hunger's shaping you.

nice, but i'm confused by the tease of the the sister. do you man-mandle july, or her sister, or both?

heinous.

This poem reminds me of the last time I ate taco bell.

A loverly poem, indeed, Mr Gayness... excellent execution of rhythm and wit. 10

Fantastic. but why is this a pimple poem?

Holy shit this was fucking awesome. Anyone for a game of lawn jarts?

quite good, plenty of varied language and very lyrical

A little lacking but reads well and the final three lines closes it well

a bit odd, the first verse build up is well but it seems to move too fast to the end. still original use of language sets it apart