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daniella replying on Anouk by daniella 8 Jul 2003, 9:13 PM
you believe what you want to believe (not beleive btw). you say you see a fart, i have my vision trained elsewhere. try it.
daniella replying on Breaking Breath by daniella 8 Jul 2003, 9:02 PM
thnx j
smlink84 replying on 2838 Denise Dr. Troy, Mi. by Bachus 8 Jul 2003, 8:48 PM
It's supposed to be "AS" your mother, but now that I think about it, It would be funny to see something like that. I hope your mother is Ok.
smlink84 on 2838 Denise Dr. Troy, Mi. by Bachus 8 Jul 2003, 8:45 PM
You know I use to have a cat and she was very cute, but two days later, after she scratched me, I gave her to the animal shelter. Also I had a pretzel and I didn't care for it much. Oh yeah, I almost forgot, I live in America and also work in America. I would be happy to have a cow ass your mother. Fairwell
smlink84 on flaming breasts by Freethinker1602 8 Jul 2003, 8:40 PM
All three of you are the same person. How do I know this you ask? You see, God has ordained this information to my knowledge. Don't belive, "Kathryn H." Your poem is very "poetic"
emeraldskies replying on A Little Cold Spot by emeraldskies 8 Jul 2003, 8:10 PM
Thanks...the others I posted are older, the first one I made was a more recent one...
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Crashing Into Me by emeraldskies 8 Jul 2003, 7:52 PM
This exposes too much, and you shouldn't because, well, good poetry use that concealment to its advantage, you give too much away here unfortunately. All of these aren't completely hopeless though, they can be reworked. You have to go for the knock out resolve. Read 12673 Jalepeno ave, by Jeremi B. Handrinos, to see what I mean.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Beneath that Layer by emeraldskies 8 Jul 2003, 7:43 PM
A man only chases the fruit he cannot have.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on A Little Cold Spot by emeraldskies 8 Jul 2003, 7:42 PM
That could be chiseled more, but it's much better.
MrsGretchen on Freedom & Then some... by horus8 8 Jul 2003, 7:28 PM
Speechless.
god'swife on the godself within by crwncka1 8 Jul 2003, 4:00 PM
masturbatic
thepinkbunnyofdoom on Everyone thinks I'm Settle by King Abdullah II 8 Jul 2003, 1:29 PM
Poor you.. I pity your pain, for being mistaken as one of the best poets, on the ranker. How sad.
thepinkbunnyofdoom on My Ass Bag by King Abdullah I 8 Jul 2003, 1:21 PM
Wow. I'm impressed by the author's note. Well done, and very informative. You deserve a Maturity Harness... Oh Yeah we don't have any of those. Well here since I couldn't offer one of those, have a D.A. style ten. -=1_0=-. ;)
thepinkbunnyofdoom on SupremeDreamer by King Abdullah I 8 Jul 2003, 1:09 PM
Whats sad is I'm amused by this.
Bachus on love sick by rymemaster 8 Jul 2003, 1:04 PM
"Now your left alone" you are or you're. If you're going to attempt being wicked and aloof? Please do it correctly, otherwise you give us poets of darkness a bad name.
Bachus on Everyone thinks I'm Settle by King Abdullah II 8 Jul 2003, 1:01 PM
Yes!
thepinkbunnyofdoom replying on Priceless Moment by thepinkbunnyofdoom 8 Jul 2003, 12:46 PM
Yeah, but hey! Its legal in canada(at least thats what I heard anyway.) If only the Bush would do something useful and make it legal... Til then its Tokin in the basement, for me.
thepinkbunnyofdoom replying on Priceless Moment by thepinkbunnyofdoom 8 Jul 2003, 12:42 PM
Awe... Your such a sweetie pie.
thepinkbunnyofdoom replying on Priceless Moment by thepinkbunnyofdoom 8 Jul 2003, 12:39 PM
It was more for Horus8's(or any other serious poet's) reaction of WTF. I know its not a Haiku, But I'm not ready to add to it yet, but Don't worry I will(Eventually).
INTRANSIT on 910 Via Padova, Claremont, Ca. (Mike Piazza Edit) by Jeremi B. Handrinos 8 Jul 2003, 12:38 PM
Smokin' the hides is always cool!