JoyLuck
replying on Erotic Crossroad in my Dream: So I Cream Into Me Panties by Luzr
3 Jul 2003, 12:16 AM
supreme's one was good
JoyLuck
replying on Erotic Crossroad in my Dream: So I Cream Into Me Panties by Luzr
3 Jul 2003, 12:16 AM
it's so hard to live life with a name called durt :(
JoyLuck
replying on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck
3 Jul 2003, 12:11 AM
threats?
some deleted user
replying on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck
3 Jul 2003, 12:09 AM
Sometimes they do, you are right. That one stands on its own, don't you think?
JoyLuck
replying on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck
3 Jul 2003, 12:08 AM
ha it's a little late
some deleted user
replying on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck
3 Jul 2003, 12:08 AM
"don't mess with california"
Threats? :)
some deleted user
replying on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck
3 Jul 2003, 12:06 AM
No you to me to "suck it."
Really now...
JoyLuck
replying on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck
3 Jul 2003, 12:04 AM
yes
but people use quotes out of context
JoyLuck
replying on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck
3 Jul 2003, 12:03 AM
threats ? lol
JoyLuck
replying on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck
3 Jul 2003, 12:02 AM
hey MUSEHEART if you dont' expect reply's then don't critique. of course i'll be defensive if you say my poem is not a poem and that it is garbage. but did i tell you to stop or be quiet? nope.
some deleted user
replying on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck
3 Jul 2003, 12:00 AM
Who me? We having a civil war now? You are ridiculous.
Maybe you don't know who you are 'messing' with.
some deleted user
replying on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck
2 Jul 2003, 11:57 PM
Look, JoyLuck, you asked what offended me. I told you. Don't ask the question if you don't want to know the answer and if you want to be a real writer, stop being so defensive and calling names (all of you).
some deleted user
replying on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck
2 Jul 2003, 11:54 PM
Why not? There are wiser ones that came before.
JoyLuck
replying on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck
2 Jul 2003, 11:28 PM
not only is it humorous
it has meaning
or it's just
shit
haha
JoyLuck
replying on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck
2 Jul 2003, 11:26 PM
don't mess with california
JoyLuck
replying on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck
2 Jul 2003, 11:25 PM
so now you're judging my language and content?
i'm sorry my poetry doesn't go along with your morals and perceptions but.alsdfla;sdjfl;kajsdf
SUCK IT
JoyLuck
replying on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck
2 Jul 2003, 11:24 PM
okay let's throw around quotes !!!!!
JoyLuck
replying on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck
2 Jul 2003, 11:23 PM
i wrote you something
http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?i d=54400