DreamerSupreme
replying on Teen Hardcore by Johnnie Baptiste
2 Jul 2003, 6:46 AM
Perhaps sleep and long work made me mistaken you for someone else. Maybe its coincidence, or i simply had my mind obsessively pondering rgallets poem. I think your settle, aka joyluck and many other names, but i could be wrong. And no, porn is the work of mercifull women blessed with beauty and the kindness to pose in sexual photos for the enjoyment of lonely hearts.. ;)
You're crazy coming out with random abuse like that. What on earth provoked such outrage? Are you some sort of anti-pornography campaigner?
mmmhmmm. claim that im crazy aye? and why do you say that, im just curiouse to know.
What are you talking about? I was warned by a friend that this site was full of lunatics. Then you come along and prove him right.
The joke isn't funny, or amusing. Your above comment saying "just kidding" seems to me to suggest that your poem was just a silly stab of humor... Due to the long amount of time you did take to respond with this, I think your attempting to save your ass from the cannon fire from the poets that the -joke- did injustice to.. alot of poets were poetically steped on by your poem.
And now you pathetically claim to be merely kidding? I don't buy it shithead. I'm unable to accept this explaination.
My comment continued:
I was surprised and saddened from his poem, because when I first came across his poetry I was impressed with his creative imagination and his amusing humor which is well expressed in his work. He did have a very original brand of poetic writing which horus8 called "twilightpoetry" which is surely the work of a gifted artist.
I won't claim to have more skill or to be more gifted in the art of poetry. Despite my poems story in which i did perhaps arrogantly compare myself to a giant, he most likely has more experience and learned ability then I do currently have.
But his ego and pride seems to have made him into a disgusting brat, who dares to be so elitist to write a poem stamping EVERY poet as a zero:
"Because poetically speaking
You are all
zeroes."
He spits in the faces of the people that did praise his skill and ability.. its shocking. And he then DARES to call himself a "Poetic Hero".
After reading his poem I was enraged and saddened, and felt suddenly sick after thinking about how I did express in my yoda poem the fact that I was impressed with him.
I unfortunely feel that I now must withdraw my earlier opinion about him. Theres more to being a poet than skill and ability, which is character and personality. His character is a sad disgrace to the spirit of the blessed art form called poetry.
He then decided to later attack me with a poem called "SupremeDreamer has a huge vagina" in response I assume to my comment.
I became fucking infuriated to the maximum levels of emotional rage. So I gave the little shit a seven for the nevertheless amusing poem and became inspired to write the poem that is presented here.
Indeed, I did step on horus8's cock when I did dare to stupidly take my arrogance to retarded galaxies and pompously commented on some of his poetry which was an insult to him and the skill he has. My words did do his work a terrible injustice.
I definately deserved the harsh response he did rightfully give me. I still feel deep embarassment and shame from my actions.
But then, I look at settles recent poem.. and I suddenly don't feel so disgusted with myself, and joyfull that I atleast know that I would never be that... I lack the words to describe fully my feelings here.
I'll leave it at that. And I wish to say that whatever happens because of my decision to write this, I do not, and will not EVER regret having written this. Whether praised or insulted, this poem I will cherish as one of the best pieces I've made, despite the likely problems and weaknesses it may have.
RGallet is Settle, aka Joyluck, TanHand, and many many other names that I did learn of when taking the time to get to know him.
I will say that I am perhaps risking a painful battle with him because my poem.
What drove me to write this up was his arrogant and pompous poem titled -Sometimes I don't login and just sit there voting 0s-
Which basically said that all of the inhabitants of poemranker were "poetically speaking" zeroes, in other words without talent or skill.
He didn't mention any exceptions or give respect to any brilliant writers that DO happen to reside in the land of Ranker Ville. Examples that come to mind (which ive seen or discovered) are:
DA - skillfull in his ability to write poetry I will admit, but
I dont like his personality which is repulsive to me, never
the less I wont deny the fact that he is a gifted poet.
Horus8 - Amazingly brilliant poet and a pretty talented musician
as well. The man I came to call yoda in one of my poems,
since he reminded me of that star wars character. Like
yoda he has vision that leaves me in awe. He also has a
wonderfull and witty sense of humor, injected
skillfully into his original and beatifull brand of
writing. I've been lucky enough to receive his advice
concerning my poetry.
Richa - A darling poetess, (I'm making an assumption that shes
female, if im wrong please corrent me) kind and
insightfull. Has a lovely style of poetry that touches
me deeply. I've been blessed with her kind commentry
and advice along with her helpfull thoughts concerning
my work.
Christof- I ran into his Sculptor poem and instantly became
deeply impressed by his masterfull writing. I do plan
to delve further into his poetry.
Mr Pig- A extremely skilled british poet that writes poetry
that has a classical perhaps victorian feel to it. He
also has a very polite attitude and the personality
that is (to my yankee mind) a good example of an
English Gentleman.
There are many other talented writers, but the ones I just mentioned are the poets that stand out the most in my mind.
Maybe settle forgot to mention them, or simply didn't give a damn.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHA!!!!
Now I feel humbled to be in your presense. I love your ranker stories dreamer. -10- as I sit down and wait for this RGallet to respond.
Great Title. VERY Banal Poem. -3-
Well thank goodness. Now if you excuse me I have to take my heart attack, medication.
NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I work for JEWS!!!! AhHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
Bachus save me. Please?.
-10-
Hee hee
As agnostic as a bag of flaming puppy coca.
love the end
"How am I to place you in a nice neatly numbered category if I don't know what you are saying?"
answer: You don't or you can ask me to translate it but I don't think it would be any better if I did. I am proud of my language and so far, I have not read anything in poemranker that says 'English only'. I realise that it must be an inconvenience to some but I do believe there are other tagalog speakers here in poemranker that can appreciate it.
... but it was nice to read what you wrote.
Thank you
- :) -
interesting. i like it. ;D blessed with 9.
boring much
i would fall asleep writin it let alone read it
sowwie u need work
Ok, your long introduction was... long.. i skipped it after reading maybe 25% of it. It was also vague and looked like senseless babble.
But your ending was interesting and well written, but lacks a creative presentation and form. It does have a very nice mind tickling point that makes me wonder what exactly are you saying. I'll save my vote in hopes of seeing you rewrite this.
Shouldn't this be a concrete? Incredible by the way.
good good, ;D heres your blessing: 10 :)