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horus8 on Women Fight Dirty by scitz 21 Jun 2003, 10:25 AM
Tight edit. Did you read my Sestina yet? I play both ways like neon deon shizowee for dowry.
horus8 replying on Women Fight Dirty by scitz 21 Jun 2003, 10:23 AM
You bought Tony Robbins book too. Do you expect him to be flattered by your cry for acceptance. Stick to what you can do (suck an okay cock) Writers could give a fucking toot who reads their blither, save your book cash for conditioner.
horus8 on Elephant Man by Kitch 21 Jun 2003, 10:12 AM
Elephant tic (whyku) by Lyme disease Better pack your trunk Cuz we're moving on up Dumbo needs peanuts
horus8 on Z higher of arts by ==Doylum 21 Jun 2003, 10:02 AM
A dandy
horus8 replying on Black liqourice & G-stringed orphans by horus8 21 Jun 2003, 9:59 AM
Thanks, you read Jeremi's sestina yet? It's choice, and hard as fuck to write. I should know I wrote it.
Mr Pig on Z higher of arts by ==Doylum 21 Jun 2003, 9:50 AM
Jolly hockeysticks this raised my furred brow and by columbus I liked it. 6
horus8 on Horus8 Vs. Book Learning by TanHand 21 Jun 2003, 9:49 AM
Look me up on the IMgayK last year I won the Girdled fluffer award, and this month I was runner up for prostitue of the month award at the Peninsula. I would of won, but Serge (the winner) has a ten inch cock, where as, I only have an assorted lego dove tail.
Kitch on Greek Tragedy#1 by Mr Pig 21 Jun 2003, 9:42 AM
Fuck !
Kitch on A Love Story For The Dead by Caducus 21 Jun 2003, 9:38 AM
Brilliant
Before I collapse of exhaustion please let me say : Yeah baby. Your head should be a holiday destination I would be there with my Piz Buin and a pile of tabloids licking the suns lashes. 10
A superior work by all accounts.
Jeremi B. Handrinos on Small Place by crwncka1 21 Jun 2003, 6:50 AM
Well, at least your poetry maintains a theme. All be it that theme is a shit soda with no straw or lid, more power to you for doing it, but geezads your grasp of the art form is handless, poetry should be an internally delivered representitive of something almost unvoiceable, a reversable 3d puzzle from way deep within the subconcious. Allowing you to learn more about yourself and the world around you. What you've done here is just fallen in love and gone pure stupid, but in your pheremonic stupor you are oblivious and are of the opinion that because your love is so terrific and new and special, than so must be your poetry about it. Unfortunately, this is a temporary reaction to a temporary disease that will bring your defenses down setting you up to be viciously pummeled and tortured by the rack of longing, coupled by fear, and the human instinct to reproduce. I would prepare for stifling inevitable jealousy and horrifficaly depressing loss. Have fun.
Jeremi B. Handrinos on One road by crwncka1 21 Jun 2003, 6:33 AM
Zanex
Jeremi B. Handrinos on White Candle by crwncka1 21 Jun 2003, 6:31 AM
Thorazine
Jeremi B. Handrinos on One Love by crwncka1 21 Jun 2003, 6:30 AM
Lithium
Jeremi B. Handrinos on where once by daniella 21 Jun 2003, 6:27 AM
Oddly compelling enough
Jeremi B. Handrinos on Breaking Breath by daniella 21 Jun 2003, 6:25 AM
Another tickler
Jeremi B. Handrinos on sink by daniella 21 Jun 2003, 6:24 AM
Excellent!
Jeremi B. Handrinos on Glass by Shar 21 Jun 2003, 6:23 AM
What?
horus8 on Fuckface by poemwanker 21 Jun 2003, 2:40 AM
Face fuck (whyku) by cheap pillow With hands clenching ears I use her nose to unzip Then I clocked in