calilegzzz
on Isolate by Beseech
31 Mar 2003, 4:31 PM
I enjoyed reading this poem, I was able to fell the writers feelings, I like that!
lol
dame, u need to stop writin this stuff and go fuck this person
lol, i think u could write something a little less cliche, but im really not1 2 judge, >6
sorry there, i ment 8
good stuff, i think its better then your poem "sexy", i give it a 7
see http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j sp?id=45655 for a lovely description of skin.
could you describe the skin better, some more imagery could help a lot for me >7
Never bashed a fag, Only tough when needed, Truth in a world void of absolutes, Always.
Nice. I like it. This style is fun to play with. 7.
damn. i read the title fast, and i thought it said, "unCOCKing happiness". it's that damn kthulah, and her prettycock poem, getting me mind on one track. sigh.