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Jigg replying on A Losing Streak by Jigg 6 Mar 2003, 4:10 PM
I believe what you would end up with is a cat with toast strapped to it's back, half way down a building, spinning on it's longitudinal axis. Quite a sight...
Jimbo replying on First Confirmation by babyBOOMER 6 Mar 2003, 4:02 PM
Thanks much, I'm now posting as Thom
Jimbo replying on First Confirmation by babyBOOMER 6 Mar 2003, 4:02 PM
Thanks, I am now posting as Thom
<~> replying on Aries, the God of war by Shardik 6 Mar 2003, 3:26 PM
yes.
Shardik replying on Aries, the God of war by Shardik 6 Mar 2003, 3:23 PM
Ram horns crash, hoving Whet stones sharply grind, census Mars in retrograde.
Frass on First Confirmation by babyBOOMER 6 Mar 2003, 2:09 PM
This is strong, and very timely, given our current state of international affairs. I want to read more of your work, bB.
<~> replying on Home by morffrom 6 Mar 2003, 2:06 PM
green works on many levels: reflecting the landscape, a metaphor for their youth (coloring everything around them), alive and vibrant, growing. there are more. these pop up in my mind immediately. trust your gut, mysterious palindrome.
morffrom on The Blooding by Mr Pig 6 Mar 2003, 2:01 PM
Not a vegetarian then ?
morffrom on Aries, the God of war by Shardik 6 Mar 2003, 1:58 PM
Ok it rocks - 9/10
<~> on Aries, the God of war by Shardik 6 Mar 2003, 1:57 PM
better. too many throw-away words for a haiku, though: ram horns crash, ____ ____ whet stones sharply grind ____ ____ Mars in retrograde. get on it son!!!
morffrom replying on Home by morffrom 6 Mar 2003, 1:55 PM
Green is a euphemism for fresh
Shardik on Blackened Cauldron by Ellie95 6 Mar 2003, 1:42 PM
Cauldron. Within. Blackened.
Shardik replying on Aries, the God of war by Shardik 6 Mar 2003, 1:36 PM
How about now?
nentwined on A Losing Streak by Jigg 6 Mar 2003, 1:11 PM
I hear that.
Ranger on Aries, the God of war by Shardik 6 Mar 2003, 12:29 PM
Only mistake here is 'wet' should be 'whet' I think. Otherwise very good indeed, but I would personally like a stronger image built. Still, a nice haiku. 8
Shardik on First Confirmation by babyBOOMER 6 Mar 2003, 12:22 PM
Gripping and punctually perfect.
<~> on Aries, the God of war by Shardik 6 Mar 2003, 12:19 PM
ewe. y the comma?
<~> on A Losing Streak by Jigg 6 Mar 2003, 12:04 PM
what happens if you duct tape buttered toast, butter side up, of course, to a cat, and drop it off the top of a building? do you create an anti-gravity field? didn't someone try this once? the cat HAS to land on its feet. the toast HAS to land butter-side down. maybe -=Dark_Angel=- can step in, and offer a ray of light, here? or at least some sort of conditional statement?
<~> on One More Mile by marvelis 6 Mar 2003, 12:02 PM
stop rhyming NOW. go to vegas. loosen up.
<~> on Text Messages Sent by blueENDyellow 6 Mar 2003, 12:00 PM
how does this have anything to do with text messages?