god'swife
on Resurrection (for Gods Wife) by Mr Pig
23 Feb 2003, 4:55 PM
Interesting. Very interesting. Somehow you manage Judas quite well. I'm intrigued by the way you make him blandly human. I think the 40 nights and the bleeding go very well together. It was a trial in the desert for him, and this life is a trial for us. We bleed through most of it, not always the bad kind, especially for we girls. Men use to bleed, but then the boys became frightened by it. Tell me, my beautiful Pig, why can't the boys be men? Things are getting desperate.
I'm giving this poem a ten because it says so much. Jesus can bleed but Judas musn't, it's not that he can't, it just that he has to make sure he plays his part inorder to make the promise come true. Fuck the pieces of silver, I believe he would have done it for free. If there is a Heaven, God must be showering Judas with gratitude.
Thank you so much for the demonstrations of love, it is greatly appreciated. Love you back.
This is a three part series based upon the male hustler.
As far as ambiguity goes i believe it's lost none if not gained more. Because it's not aimed at prostitution in general which was my point with the series. Since the male and female world of sex for hire are two extremely different arenas, because the female prostitute deals with the opposite sex. The male prostitute deals 95% of the time with the same sex. There is no such thing as Deuce Bigelow, sorry.
Thanks for the tip honeypie
Note to TanHand, that'd be a good poem.
A broken heart is better than a heart that's left alone, silly, at least according to the NewOrder song. A broken heart is like a fistfight or The Stooges - horrible but life affirming.
Add some stilton and you'll be cooking with Ganus (this comment is funny on many different levels)
RHODE ISLAND IN THE HEEEOUSE. WARRICK. APPARENTLY THEY SUCKED AND THEN GOT REALLY REALLY HOT.
The change eliminated ambiguity.
Thanks. You hit the . . . ummm . . . nail right on the head.
here is the room where i concocted an ovaltine booby trap to fall upon the head of my mean uncle bruce, but then he made me tongue flick his peter and the experience most obviously turned me into a roomless homosexual also wrapped in a sheet.
Like a spicy enchillada.
Maybe i can clarify the symbolism of the closet? it's a profound metaphor the like of which no one can imagine a place that holds boogie men, skeletons, and apparently homosexuals. and also the ever rare pre teen pot s,oker durin an intermission while watching rambo two search for sp-ock, i meant the wrath of slahng. i meant tattoo and fantasy island, but not ricardo monteban selling me an oldsmobile, see.
Quite right.
As "The Eye" testifies, I am the "Elephant Man".
O_O coo....
Wow!! A human angle. How odd. There is nothing wrong with Diet Coke D.A. and I'm sorry kids made funny of you. Yeah... Well buck up lad lifes not all bad and all that bloody nonsense, sorry if you took my get a life comment overly harshly and watch your insulin levels. I actually like seeing your name posted around here telling us what morons we are so... Thanks for being the bugger that you are D.A.
On the first complaint. I've edited the poem so that breaks are more obvious in the way it's meant to be read. So perhaps that will clarify why there is a second "in the closet".
So now the poem has 4 verses instead of two, the first three following the same style the last being different to the other three. Can't comment on your second complaint as you don't explain your gripe with it. The last line is however meant to break with the rest of the poem.
HA HA HA HA HA HA HA (x9)
i wish my mother wuz dead so i could write a poeme this beautiful..9..
2 complaints.
1st i don't think you need to add a second "in the closet" in the first verse.
2nd the last line of the second verse is absolutely pathetic
mmmm i like it and i get the end but its a litle unclear and anonymous