-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
on The Grapes of Wrath by ==Doylum
5 Feb 2003, 5:48 PM
When you enter the vineyard of your neighbor you may eat grapes as you please to your satisfaction, but you must not take away any in a container. Deuteronomy 23:24
By the way, this is my 2000th comment guys! Party at my place!!!!1
Sometimes i laugh at myself, some times i don't I.... (thwumpe) <Baba is knocked off of the podium and into the shadows by what appears to be a head of kale? from where? It has a Nasa stamp on it? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! YOU FOOLS! NOT THE KALE TOO!>
Shhh... lest they learn too much, and bring things across which should not be spoken of.
i am just a cobblestone on the road to recovery
Oops Yeah I can't count or spell. Oh well...
Hey, Zzin. First time I check out the 'ranker in months, and I post an opinion within 1 second of yours. Funny.
Ooh yeah, I like this, even if I don't understand it. The words 'Under Will' seem to make sense; but, not sure how 'love' figures in the poem.
but still feels incomplete. what is your bond? (i mean, i know it's love, but i want more from this.)
Yeah, I couldn't salvage it in the end, so I chopped the thing out altogether. Better to stick with the older arts anyway, I think.
hahahahahaha
Brava... that's rather magnificent. The third stanza seems a bit weak, howe'er.
I concur.
Might I add what a great suggestion that is.
Can we have kiddies.
I quite like this...it's not so depressing, but yeah, it's cool. I don't think that you'll get a good vote from poetandknowit, somehow.
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Nice.
A children's scream should be either a child's scream or children's scream...other than that, yeah.
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Do you listen to Black Sabbath, Athena?
"In the daylight/runs darkness/on the verge of night a fear is born/sweeter than the dream" etc. Good song
Nice proverb aside from the syllables.
Wonderful, this rocks.
Not as good as Harry Potter but still worthy of a nine! Keep it up!
Beef and broccoli with oyster sauce. choice!