Caducus
on Sticks and Stones Farm, Pot Luck Thursday Nights by <~>
6 Jan 2003, 6:47 AM
I like your style of writing, its so distinctive to you. 9
let me slurk some coffee and we'll get down to business. Definitely smoother.
This is the opposite of Iron Maiden singing S.T.Colerige.
"and the ship it sinks like lead into the sea"
Damn good!
Fuck off
Hnufhnufhnuf
Very funny...very, very funny...have 9
Um...
HAIL SATAN HAIL SATAN
#47 salutes you on yet another worthless rant on society the flock of sheep that calls itself sane HAHAHahahaha........
You paint fire and hell on a canvas
of black.
Let down only by repetition of "forever", "demons" and "Shadows"
Do not think me disingenuous, I enjoyed the indulgence.
Ahhhh Mr Smooth welcome to poemranker I cant wait to see what you get for this fantastic piece of literature have an 8 for good luck
hey maybe you'll see this....I like your style..maybe you should take a look at mine....feel free to send an email to me...you'll find it in my profile
There is something hauntingly beautiful about the lines that you used. All those pretty words - It fires up the imagination.
Cleverdevice, you rule!
Yar, and oim a leprechaun
Oh yes..."In a chorus of glorious choirs that strip your flesh in fires", what a line...I'll be saying that all day.
Great poem! 9
Huh?
yer a good man, laddie. cheers, I'd buy ye a Guinness if I could.