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on joyriding by Bill Z Bub
5 Jan 2003, 7:17 PM
3, i have to go work now. thanks for earlier.
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okay.
now i know you're full of shit.
yeah. it's a brave new world i guess.
hephaestus you even threw me on this. could you explain, and help me get it?
fix the question marks.
even hairlips can be surgically removed. have a 7.
You made me smile and think warm warm thoughts. Thanks. I think this means I'm on the right track here.
soup-con.
very pleasant. a good change of pace from the elitist trust fund trash poemranker attracts. have a 9.
Yes I am biased, yes I am thrilled!
Great poem!! I echo all the sentiments! Jill!
no. you don't. that's your fucking problem.
Your eyes twinkled at me
Like faithless lillies;
what a great line. you make the mood very clear without falling into cliche. good job.
Thanks Cadacus. I wonder who'd give it a one though? BAH, and to not have the balls to leave a comment. Thanks again!
i think you're kickin' it live.
i told you i loved this poem. its you, its totally you...and the ending is wonderful...10
...sort of agree with the dude above me, but I love the first stanza. And the second for that matter...I'll think about the third for a bit...
Best of dthe three.