Bill Z Bub
replying on unsent by Bill Z Bub
1 Jan 2003, 7:09 PM
Not sure what the golden q-tip is, but thanks, dude. I think.
I'm bloody tired.
an unsent letter?GOLDEN Q-TIP AWARD...A POEMRANKER MUST READ..wonder no longer.@
really interesting and full of dark emotions.
I must ponder it again.
did you sell me out the other day to that newbie?t
Je suis le pamplemouse et dans le fenetre. Avec les ouef.
What an incredible waste of bandwidth you've discovered!
"and lost like tears in rain." try
lost as my tears in her rain.
"through my body, in to my soul." how about 'into instead of in to...?a
She died. thanks anyway.
"orsmiles on thier" before you attempt to get crafty nb you should, perhaps. spell check.
"Here's a secret, as the hourglass turns, you don't get any younger"you're kidding? nice secret, by the way you are really on a role now..here let me help you out.0 why? because you're metaphoric, and genuine.t
It's up to you, I made this while on the porceline crapper thingy.
jesus christ.??
Look at me, the stupid turd
lookie now, I shot your bird
I know the answer to life
We all know it isn't your wife
Are you going to eat MY fish?
Well ywer gonne Sindit agel qish
Your cat is dead, let's all rejoice
I ate it's head, spit out it's voice.
( :-) Some time later, Man-with-Pants!!)
Signed, Dirty-room
My gosh, this is a memorable one, such pictures it plays into your mind, you relate to every word and hang on to the next.
Bravo =)
i like it, i can feel the actor's anticipation and excitement.
really good and in depth. i like it. :)