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some deleted user on Forgotten by famenglory 1 Jan 2003, 5:12 PM
I like his plan ;) Nice
powerline on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT 1 Jan 2003, 4:49 PM
I find this very relaxing. At least I know I'm not the only one counting tiles when on line at Taco Bell. Seriously...your perspective on things around is very unique. I wish you were my neighbor so we could drink beers and laugh about things around us.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on The Birds by lunar 1 Jan 2003, 4:37 PM
The film is better.
deep-as-a-puddle on The Birds by lunar 1 Jan 2003, 3:23 PM
IT DOSENT RHYME, AGHHHHHH! i really didnt like this the first time i read it but when u told me what it was about it all feel into place! its actually really deep! tr??s impressed!
Bill Z Bub replying on strange beds (1989) by Bill Z Bub 1 Jan 2003, 2:27 PM
Yeah, that first line is one thats been bugging me, but I'm not sure what to change it to yet. At the time I meant it to be something mystical. I wrote the first half of this many years ago. Thankyou, yes, I want to turn you on. I want to turn on the world! Any suggestions?
god'swife on strange beds (1989) by Bill Z Bub 1 Jan 2003, 1:52 PM
Great potential. Very sexual, great, that's what you're talking about anyway. 'Touching her halo' Is this a part of her body, or a something mystical? Please don't make a real woman into a goddess, let her be real. Take away her halo, and I believe all the rest becomes that much more meaningful. It's just my opinion, and since I really no nothing about the story behind this I may be all wrong. Anyway it turned me on.
rockinindividual on Turn your back by kliq 1 Jan 2003, 1:16 PM
its rhythm is somewhat messed up...makes reading it kind of jerky...4
rockinindividual on The Birds by lunar 1 Jan 2003, 1:15 PM
wow...its good...but its almost too subtle, i can't quite see the story, but i love what i see so far...7
rockinindividual on Confused by debased 1 Jan 2003, 1:13 PM
i like the repetition, would be awesome to hear somebody read this...8
rockinindividual on new year's eve by razorgrin 1 Jan 2003, 1:12 PM
yep...thats new years eve...WONDERFUL description...10
Yardbird replying on The Elephant Olympics by Yardbird 1 Jan 2003, 1:05 PM
Oh, I wish....!
Bachus replying on The spleenless poet by Bachus 1 Jan 2003, 1:01 PM
Just playing around with settle. you know? letting him kmow that 'i care alot'.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on haunter of the dark by razorgrin 1 Jan 2003, 12:49 PM
I bet you would enjoy the song "Ea, Lord of the Depths" by Burzum.
Yardbird replying on The Elephant Olympics by Yardbird 1 Jan 2003, 12:44 PM
Apologies. You're right - it does come as a bit out-of-the-blue. Point taken - I'll try and make amendments post haste.
Ranger on Intervention by livingcanvas 1 Jan 2003, 11:27 AM
Ever listen to Counting Crows?
Ranger on Intervention by livingcanvas 1 Jan 2003, 11:26 AM
Ha ha ha
Ranger on spirit of a grama by livingcanvas 1 Jan 2003, 11:25 AM
Hmm, this isn't bad at all. Have you actually set this to music, because some of the lines don't quite fit with a rhythm, and I wondered whether this was deliberate. Anyway, not bad, I liked the last verse. 7
some deleted user on Shy by Theo 1 Jan 2003, 9:23 AM
i love it, theres just something that touches me, maybe because i know the feeling.... 10
Bill Z Bub on haunter of the dark by razorgrin 1 Jan 2003, 9:15 AM
Ia! Ia! Azathoth! Azathoth!
Bill Z Bub on new year's eve by razorgrin 1 Jan 2003, 9:12 AM
That happens to me every friggin' year. I never plan ahead. When will I learn?