INTRANSIT
on Winter's Cabin by powerline
1 Jan 2003, 8:56 AM
Go back to the cabin and get more material. This could be stretched nicely.
Welcome aboard, sir. You know what needs to be with this piece. Suggestion: Look up Christofs'
"To a sculpter".
I know, I know. I'm so frigging close it's killing me! Thanks.
go on wit yo bad self.
Is he the brother of Imoteph?
I particularly like the last stanza. It tells me the storm was a financial or political storm or a mass of people. Not horrible weather. I picture an old church or building with gargoyles. I dinged you two for the "sale".
Would you mind telling me what you saw or felt when you read this? I'm so afraid of touching this one, but an outside view is tantamount to improvement,yes?
Thanks for the comment Tintagiles....care to elaborate on what is bringing this poem down? The form?
This reminds me of that "hamish hamish bo-bamish fanafanafo-famish me-mi-mo-mamish: hamish" thing, except it would be impossible to do with Nyarlathotep. AAAA+++++ WOULD BUY AGAIN.
Nice idea, badly done.
Whine whine whine. Why am I not surprised you think so? Happy New Year.
What? Lying to children about Fat guys breaking into your house, the capatilist exploitaion or the fact some guy was born, he said, 'hey, lets stop fighting and start loving' and was then crucified as a dangerous radical?
The devil may know, the devil may care, and the devil may damn you straight to hell. And I most certainly hope he will. Sinatra is dead because he was old. And a smarmy crooner who stole songs. And very, very boring.
You need help almost as much as me. SPEAK ENGLISH BITCH!
well, somebody's cranky. where's the love. p&k, all, what say we teach this bob-o the true meaning of xmas?
suckin' the big one. jimmy-ma-bob, your kung-fu is no good. no happy ending for you.
Ouch.
Nice. Have you considerd pysciatric help?
Beautiful. No, really. Brings up so many memories. Damn, now I'm all upset. Have 10, you depressing bugger.