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INTRANSIT on Winter's Cabin by powerline 1 Jan 2003, 8:56 AM
Go back to the cabin and get more material. This could be stretched nicely.
INTRANSIT on Word Baskets by powerline 1 Jan 2003, 8:52 AM
Welcome aboard, sir. You know what needs to be with this piece. Suggestion: Look up Christofs' "To a sculpter".
INTRANSIT replying on The Eskimo and the fish by INTRANSIT 1 Jan 2003, 8:22 AM
I know, I know. I'm so frigging close it's killing me! Thanks.
INTRANSIT on KEO - Happy New Year! by Wulf 1 Jan 2003, 8:20 AM
go on wit yo bad self.
INTRANSIT on haunter of the dark by razorgrin 1 Jan 2003, 8:12 AM
Is he the brother of Imoteph?
INTRANSIT on Haffner's Mill by powerline 1 Jan 2003, 8:08 AM
I particularly like the last stanza. It tells me the storm was a financial or political storm or a mass of people. Not horrible weather. I picture an old church or building with gargoyles. I dinged you two for the "sale".
INTRANSIT replying on Februarys mother by INTRANSIT 1 Jan 2003, 8:04 AM
Would you mind telling me what you saw or felt when you read this? I'm so afraid of touching this one, but an outside view is tantamount to improvement,yes?
powerline replying on Haffner's Mill by powerline 1 Jan 2003, 7:02 AM
Thanks for the comment Tintagiles....care to elaborate on what is bringing this poem down? The form?
This reminds me of that "hamish hamish bo-bamish fanafanafo-famish me-mi-mo-mamish: hamish" thing, except it would be impossible to do with Nyarlathotep. AAAA+++++ WOULD BUY AGAIN.
Tintagiles on Haffner's Mill by powerline 31 Dec 2002, 10:17 PM
Nice idea, badly done.
Tintagiles replying on Why? by Bazilla 31 Dec 2002, 10:14 PM
Whine whine whine. Why am I not surprised you think so? Happy New Year.
razorgrin on Why? by Bazilla 31 Dec 2002, 10:13 PM
shutcher mouth, tint-bunny. sinatra is totally awesome.
Bobjim replying on Ode to poetandknowit by Bobjim the II 31 Dec 2002, 10:10 PM
What? Lying to children about Fat guys breaking into your house, the capatilist exploitaion or the fact some guy was born, he said, 'hey, lets stop fighting and start loving' and was then crucified as a dangerous radical?
Tintagiles on Why? by Bazilla 31 Dec 2002, 10:08 PM
The devil may know, the devil may care, and the devil may damn you straight to hell. And I most certainly hope he will. Sinatra is dead because he was old. And a smarmy crooner who stole songs. And very, very boring.
Bobjim replying on Ode to -=Dick_Angle=- by Bobjim the II 31 Dec 2002, 10:06 PM
You need help almost as much as me. SPEAK ENGLISH BITCH!
razorgrin on Ode to poetandknowit by Bobjim the II 31 Dec 2002, 10:00 PM
well, somebody's cranky. where's the love. p&k, all, what say we teach this bob-o the true meaning of xmas?
razorgrin on Ode to -=Dick_Angle=- by Bobjim the II 31 Dec 2002, 9:57 PM
suckin' the big one. jimmy-ma-bob, your kung-fu is no good. no happy ending for you.
Another Bobjim?!?! on Games by BrandonW 31 Dec 2002, 9:18 PM
Ouch.
Nice. Have you considerd pysciatric help?
Another Bobjim?!?! on Intervention by livingcanvas 31 Dec 2002, 8:29 PM
Beautiful. No, really. Brings up so many memories. Damn, now I'm all upset. Have 10, you depressing bugger.